pehlan tan sorry jass ,reply late kar rahi haan,padea hune ee aje.

jassi mainu padde lagda c ,jivien main balraj sahni da koi safarnama pad rahi howan.

in bin aakhan agey picture ghuman lag payi.

asal ch jassi sab ton  auakha hunda,aapne barey likhna,and eh umeed karni k padan wala os nu dilon kabool v karey,es sab d ek he sharat hundi hai k likhan wala likhat ch imaandaar hovey.

and kuriye teri imaandari tan mouhon bol rahi hai.eh sab likhan lagey terian bharian akhan main dekh sakdi haan.

boh sohna likhea hai. ehnu continue karungi ??

pdna aa agge didi?????

lai kuriye hor ki.

kise hor topic te shuru kar lai,social relations te aapan shuru karde haan

likhungi didi...

bahut khoob jassi g...

tuhadi nanke di kahani pad k bahut vadia laggaya ....assi ta eho hi keh sakde haan ...

par eh kahani likhan lagaya tuhanu keho jeha lagaya hoyu eh ta tusi hi jande oh janab ....

par sachian kahania apne mooho, kise-2 nu bian karnian hi aundian ne ....

te sach nu padna har kise nu changa lagda hai .....

bahut shukriya g eh sab share karn layi ....

thanks robin.. mainu apne aap naal bht pyaar ae te apni fmly naal bht close han main.. especiallly dadke (paternal) so nankian bare bht kuch c dil ch..kyunki eh rishta bakian lyi equally means rkhda hunda aa te sade lyi ikk kamzor pehlu reha so main shuru ton ee sensitive han so oh chhotian chhhotian gallan v mainu yaad ne .. so hun share krkr dil hlka ho reha aa and may be jinna kol eh rishte haige ne oh ehna rishtyan di ehmiat nu jann jaan..ehi kaamna kr skdi han..

baki sahit da wartak roop likhna chnga lggda aa.. purani sanjh aa.. starting stories ton baad ehde naal ee kiti c likhan di..but han eh thora aukha es lyi hunda hai k readers nu bann k rkhna hunda aa..so es cheez di practice chal rhi hai.. heheehehe..