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Tanveer  Sharma
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Tomorrow

Tomorrow will be the day of happiness,

Because my all hopes and dreams will come true

Tomorrow will be the day of proudness,

As my hardwork will move to its success too....

Tomorrow will be the day of gladness,

When My future will be filled with bright colors,

Tomorrow will be the day of happiness,

As sun will definitely shine in my favor.

Tomorrow will be the day of lots of smiles,

As I will reach so high into the sky,

As my present's hardwork will be fruitful,

And Tomorrow will be the day for being successful.

 

WRITTEN BY - TANVEER SHARMA

03 Feb 2012

ਰਾਜਵਿੰਦਰ    ਕੌਰ
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nice lines!i like it...tfs

03 Feb 2012

Tanveer  Sharma
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THANKS

thanks a lot Rajwinder ji :)

03 Feb 2012

ਗੁਰਦੀਪ ਬੁਰਜੀਆ /ਦੀਪ/
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ਮੇਰੇ ਖਿਆਲ ਨਾਲ ਇੰਗਲਿਸ਼ ਵਿਚ ਜਿਆਦਾ ਲਿਖਿਆ ਕਰੋ , ਵਧੀਆ

04 Feb 2012

Tanveer  Sharma
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well thanks for your suggestion. But I prefer both languages equally. English as well as Punjabi. 

04 Feb 2012

Iqbal Singh Dhaliwal
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ਕਮਾਲ ਕਰ ਦਿਤਾ ਤਨੁ ਜੀ,gud command over ENGLISH, I like it.

04 Feb 2012

Tanveer  Sharma
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thank you so very much sir for your kind words.

05 Feb 2012

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ਬੀਬਾ ਜੀ...ਬਹੁਤ ਸੋਹਣਾ ਲਿਖਿਆ ਹੈ...

ਗੁਰਦੀਪ ਬੁਰਜੀਆਂ. ਜੀ ਦੀ ਰਾਇ ਤੇ ਵੀ ਤਵੱਜੋਂ ਦੇਣਾ...ਪਰ ਇਹ ਵੀ ਯਾਦ ਰਖਣਾ ਕੇ ਅਸੀਂ punjabizm ਤੇ ਲਿਖ ਰਹੇ ਹਾਂ...ਸੋ ਪੰਜਾਬੀ ਨੂੰ ਵੀ bandaਮਾਣ-ਤਾਣ ਜਰੁਰ ਦੇਣਾ...ਧਨਵਾਦ ਜੀ

05 Feb 2012

Tanveer  Sharma
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thanks for your suggestion . I know k mainu kithe ki likhna chahida. thank you...

06 Feb 2012

jujhar singh
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I know k mainu kithe ki likhna chahida. thank you...

ਕੀ ਗੱਲ ਮੈਡਮ ਜੀ...ਗੁੱਸਾ ਕਰ ਲਿਆ....ਮੇਰਾ ਮਤਲਬ ਇਹ ਨਹੀ ਸੀ ਕੇ ਤੁਸੀਂ ਇੰਗਲਿਸ਼ 'ਚ ਵਧੀਆ ਨਹੀ ਲਿਖਦੇ....ਮੇਰਾ ਮਤਲਬ ਤਾਂ ਹੋਰ ਸੀ...ਖੈਰ...ਤੁਹਾਡੀ ਮਰਜੀ

07 Feb 2012

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