http://www.5abi.com/dharavahak/urra-onkar/06-kaka-onkar-dhillon-311211.htm 

Hello all

just a quick query

My objective with this story is to show the real world in terms of how horrible it is, and for that reason did not want to repeat the same as the thousands of themes and punjabi novels already out there. However I do not want to alienate Punjabi readers either... looking at this work so far, I would like to know if it is too extreme in depiction of violence and sexual innuendo for Punjabi tastes, or considering its themes ( the violence really only occurs in the villians world) is it acceptable?

In short does it put you off reading further or the opposite effect?

Roop