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Satvir Kaur jhali
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Bachpaan

kyu beet gya bachpaan kyu beet gya....?

jawani waley khamb laa k kidhrey nu udh gya

ek yaad ban k bas dil wich reh gya

kyu beet gya bachpaan kyu beet gya....?

 

maa di godi wala nigh kujh hor saama maan leindi

ohdey nighey hathaan da ehsas chura leindi

mera chera vekh oh meetha jeha haas peindi

pyaar naal chuk mainu gaal oh la leindi

wapis murr aouna nhi saama jo beet gya

kyu beet gya bachpaan kyu beet gya....?

 

baapu di ungal farr turna main sikheya

jithey kadi digi ohney hathaan naal chukeya

baar baar digdi nu oh chukda naa thakeya

sir dey taaz waang saambh mainu rakheya

hona koi merey raab jehey baap jeha

kyu beet gya bachpaan kyu beet gya....?

 

tyaar mainu kar maa school nu c bhejdi

vapis jd aoundi mera rasta c vekhdi

maa vekh main v ohdi godi jhaat charr jandi

rajj k pyar dindi fir pairr merey ghuti jaandi

ajj yaad kr bachpaan dil mera hil gya

kyu beet gya bachpaan kyu beet gya....?

jawani waley khamb laa k kidhrey nu udh gya...........

 

 

I LOVE MY PARENTS....

bhul chuk maaf ji..................

27 Apr 2010

Amrinder Singh
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nice one ji...

27 Apr 2010

Satwinder  Satti
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Sohna likheya satvir. Good aa

27 Apr 2010

Nancy Kaur
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wow, this is awesome

I love it a lot...

Keep it up

06 May 2010

narinder singh
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ehsaas bahut wdia han,,,,

08 May 2010

Karam Garcha Khottey Sikkey
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gr8 job

 

keep writing..............

14 May 2010

Balihar Sandhu BS
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เจฌเจนเฉเจค เจตเจงเฉ€เจ† เจœเฉ€....tfs

14 May 2010

Kahlon Gagandeep Singh
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bahut vadia satvir ji

nice work.............bade sohne ehsas ne tuhadi rachna wich.............maa baap lai pyar saaf jhalakda hai......

14 May 2010

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