Chukki Kalam.... kuj likhan

pr ki likhan?? te Kihde bare??

Jerhe bhukhe saunde raatan nu,

jo tarsde maa diyan baatan...

Sir te jina de chatt nhi,

koi plosan wala hath nhi...

Rooh kambdi thar-thar-thar-thar

jad sochan ehde bare...

Chukki Kalam... kuj likhan

pr ki likhan?? te Kihde bare??

jo nit hi bheta charhdi hai,

kite kukh vich shaitana di...

kite hawas de haiwana di...

kite daaj de be-imana di...

Rooh kambdi thar-thar-thar-thar

jad sochan ehde bare...

Chukki Kalam... kuj likhan

pr ki likhan?? te Kihde bare??

hats off hats off ..

its a great poetry....

kya baat hai har sheyar har satar ik haluna hai

ik ulambha hai smaaj de kathit almbardar akhwaun waleyan nu..

ihna gambhir muddean te gambhir hoke sochan layi majbur kardi hai eh rachna...

great effort...................jeo 

hor vi khubb likho

duawaan aap g lai,...........sukhpal**

boht boht dhanwaad veer psand karn lyi.....bda changa lageya tuhada comment padh k thanx once again

soch te ehsasa di gehrai ba kmal e veere bhut sohna likhiya ee

teh dilon shukriya veere....