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Meetu Choudhary
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Meri Kalam se

Hi Frndz hope you will like it.

 

BackGround:

I was in hospital. went with my bhabi for her routine check up i crossed the icu section and reached the gynic section and felt the diffrence one section of the building is spreading smiles on the faces and the other section forced prople to losse hope and  to faint and give only memories i remeber when i lost my close one and now when i m witing for a new one to come in our home and lifes dew lines of my heart at that tym.. laga jaise mera koi apna wapas aane wala hai....

 

Poem:

 

ਜਿਸਮ ਤੋ ਰੂਹ ਅਲਗ ਹੁਦੀ ਹੈ ,

ਮਿਲਣ ਆਤਮਾ ਦਾ ਪਰਮਾਤ ਨਾਲ ਹੁਦਾ ਹੈ,

ਦੇ ਕੇ ਯਾਦਾਂ ਜ਼ਮਾਨੇ ਨੂ ,

ਕਰਨ ਚਲ ਪੈਦੀ ਏ ਰੋਸ਼ਨ ਹੋਰ ਕਿਸੀ ਘਰਾਨੇ ਨੂ ,

ਬਣਦੀ ਹੈ ਓਹ ਫਿਰ ਯਾਦਾਂ ਓਹੀ ਕਸਮ ਵਾਦੇ ,

ਏ ਜੀਵਨ ਚਕਰ ਹੈ ਅਜ ਮੇਰੇ ਨਾਲ ਕਲ ਤੇਰੇ ਨਾਲ ........

05 Feb 2012

j singh
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Good . its great start.........conti.........

05 Feb 2012

ਬਿੱਟੂ ਕਲਾਸਿਕ  .
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ਬਹੁਤ ਵਧੀਆ ........... ਲਿਖਦੇ ਰਹੋ !!!

06 Feb 2012

Pradeep Gupta
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bahut khoob...

06 Feb 2012

charanjit mann
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khoob

06 Feb 2012

Meetu Choudhary
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hosla afzai k liye shukriya
07 Feb 2012

Talwinder Singh
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wow its awesome....

17 Feb 2012

Meetu Choudhary
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ਧ੍ਯਾਂਵਾਦ

ਧ੍ਯਾਂਵਾਦ ਤਲਵਿੰਦਰ ਜੀ

19 Feb 2012

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