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Shammi Bains
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paawe athru suk jaan

Ni ki kha main tere baare
Chah k v main kuj keh nhi sakda....
Main janda tu meri takdeer nhi
Pr main tere bina reh nhi sakda....
Tu eham hissa e meri jindgi da
Fer main tainu khas Kyon keh ni sakda....
Meriyan akhan cho paawe athru suk jaan
Teriyan akhhan di laali main seh nhi sakda...
Kehdi e oh paawe SHAMMI nu lakh waari mrjaana
Pr main onu marjaani keh nhi sakda....
Pnd den paawe lok mainu hr tha te
Pr main ik v maara bol ode baare seh nhi sakda....
Kra tainu jaan apni to wad main pyar
Ih gal main sahmne tere kyon keh nhi sakda....
Mera sub tu e mera raab tu e
Galti nal v j pul gya naam tera fer Shammi agla saah v le nhi sakda......Bains Saab.

04 May 2012

j singh
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Very Nycc......

04 May 2012

   Jagdev Raikoti
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ਕਾਫੀ ਬਦੀਆ ....
ਪੜਨ ਚ ਥੋੜੀ ਮੁਸਕਲ ਆਈ ,ਅੰਗ੍ਰੇਜੀ ਚ ਹੋਣ ਕਰਕੇ .

04 May 2012

Shammi Bains
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ਤੁਹਾਡਾ ਧਨਵਾਦ ਬਹੁਤ ਬਹੁਤ ,ਇਹ ਮੈਂ ਕਲ ਹੀ ਲਿਖੇਯਾ  ਸੀ,ਬਾਕੀ ਆਪਨੇ commments  ਪੇਜਦੇ ਰਹਾ ਕਰੋ .

05 May 2012

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