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Deepak Arora
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just a feeling...

ਅੱਜ ਲੋੜ੍ ਹੈ ਆਜਾਦੀ ਦੀ ਸੋਚ ਅਤੇ ਦਿਲਾਂ ਨੂੰ, 

ਬੰਨਿਆ ਈਰਖਾ ਅਤੇ ਗੁੱਸੇ ਨੇ ਜੰਜੀਰਾਂ ਨਾਲ ਜਿਸਨੂੰ,

ਹੋ ਗਏ ੬੩ ਸਾਲ ਮਿਲੇ ਆਜਾਦੀ ਨੂੰ, 

ਪਰ ਫੇਰ ਵੀ ਇਹ ਢਾਂਚਾ ਕੁਝ ਹੋਰ ਕਹਿੰਦਾ ਹੈ, 

ਭ੍ਰਸ਼ਟਾਚਾਰ ਅਤੇ ਭਰੂਣ ਹੱਤਿਆ ਵਰਗੇ ਕੋਹੜਾਂ ਨੂੰ ਵੱਢਣਾ ਹੈ,

ਦਿਲਾਂ ਚ ਸਾਂਝ ਪਾ ਕੇ ਅੱਗੇ ਅਸੀ ਵਧਣਾ ਹੈ,

ਆਉ ਮਿਲ ਕੇ ਪ੍ਰਣ ਲਈਏ ਅੱਜ ਇਸ ਦਿਹਾੜੇ ਤੇ,

ਬਦਲਨਾ ਦੇਸ਼ ਨੂੰ ਨਹੀਂ ਆਪਣੇ ਆਪ ਨੂੰ ਹੈ,

ਜਦ ਹਰ ਕੋਈ ਹੈ ਖੁਸ਼ਹਾਲ, ਉਦੋਂ ਹੀ ਦੇਸ਼ ਖੁਸ਼ਹਾਲ ਹੈ ||

 

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26 Jan 2011

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very well said

just a feeling..........well expressed.

 

keep writing n  keep sharing!!!!!!!!!

26 Jan 2011

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thnx aman ji .. :)

26 Jan 2011

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Just a feeling is gud feeling bt nt nt a just feeling.its a g8 feeling

Good Job

26 Jan 2011

Deepak Arora
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shukriya rajinder ji... meharbani :)

26 Jan 2011

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g8 job deepak. g.....keep sharing

26 Jan 2011

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shukriya rajvinder ji... :)

26 Jan 2011

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Nice feeling but I did not get the meaning of first line there seems to be some kinda typo...

26 Jan 2011

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u mean the meaning or some spelling.... ?

26 Jan 2011

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never mind, i read in different flow and put comma at wrong place... nice one

26 Jan 2011

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