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Sharanpreet Kaur Randhawa
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Okay I m busy for next 2 days but I will try when I get some quiet time and share it
05 Jul 2012

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nice.
Great job sharan... enjh hi mukadaran di poarriaan te chadhde jao oh din door nhi jdo asi kahange khushmizaaz nazim sharanpreet kaur are a good writer. thankxx . if u dont mind ta request send kra i am a new user g.
23 Jul 2012

Sharanpreet Kaur Randhawa
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Naginder g eh lines main nhi likhian. 
Thanx tuhanu changiyan lagian. I am myself a new user. Just got active on punjabizm after finishing studies. Add kro chahe na kro baahla fark nhi painda ..,u can still send msg and access details without adding. Either way is fine with me...

24 Jul 2012

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Kaho To Laut Jate Hain
Abhi To Baat Lamhon Tak He, Saalon Tak Nahi Aai
Abhi Muskaanon Ki Nobat Bhi Naalon Tak Nahi Aai
Abhi To Koi Majborri Khiyaalon Tak Nahi Aai
Abhi To Gard Peroon Tak Hay. Baalon Tak Nahi Aai


Kaho To Laut Jate Hain
Chalo Ek Faisla Karne Shajar Ki Aut Jate Hain
Abhi Kajil Ki Dori, Surkh Galon Tak Nahi Aai
Zubaan Datoon Talak Hai Zehr Piyaalon Tak Naheen Aai
Ibhi To Mushk-E-Kustori Ghazaloon Tak Nahin Aai
Ibhi Rodad-E-Beunwaan Humaray Darmian He, Duniyan Waaloon Tak Nahin Aai
Kaho To Lout Jatan Hain

Chalo Ik Faisala Karnay Sharjer Ki Out Jatan Han
Abhi Nazdeek Hein Ghar Aur Manzil Door He Apni
Mubada Naar Ho Jayay Ye Hesti Noor Hai Apni

Kaho To Lout Jatay Han
Chalo Ik Fasala Karnay Shajar Ki Out Jatan Han.
Ye Rasta Piyar Ka Rasta,
Rasan Ka Daar Ka Rasta,
Bohat Dushwar He Jaana
Keh Is Rastay Ka Her Zarra Bhi Ik Kohsar He Jana.

Kaho To Lout Jatay Hain

Maray Baray Na Kuch Socho
Mujhay Tay Karna Ata He
Rasan Ka Daar Ka Rasta
Ye Asaiboon Bhara Rasta
Ye Andhi Ghaar Ka Rasta

Tumhary Gaisoowun Ki Chaoon Mil Jayay
To Suraj Se Ulajhna Baat He Kia He
Utha Lo Apna Saya To Meri Ouqat Hi Kia He
Tumhara Narm O Nazuk Hath Ho Gr Mere Haathon Me
To Me Ye Samjho Ga
Ke Jasay Do Jahan Ho Mari Muthi Me
Tumhara Kurb Ho To Mushkilan Kafoor Ho JaYen
Ye Undhay Ur Kalay Rastay Pur Noor Ho JaYan.

Mujhe Maloom Hei Itna Keh Dayem Zandagi Posheeda He In Char Kadmoon Me
Bohat Si Ra-Hatan Muzmir Hain In Dushwar Rastoon Man
Meray Baray Na Kuch Socho
Tum Apni Bat Batlaoo
Kahoo To Chaltay Rahtay Hainโ€ฆ

Kahoo To Lout Jatay Hainโ€ฆโ€ฆ


Poet: Ahmad Faraz
24 Jul 2012

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thnx Arinder , eh tusin bohat achha kita ghazal nu poora kar ke .......

mazedar hai ...

24 Jul 2012

Sharanpreet Kaur Randhawa
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Bahut bahut bahut thanx arinder ji. Enni khoobsoorat ghazal faraz sahib hi likh sakde si. Sorry friends mainu pta nhi c.. 

25 Jul 2012

Gurpreet Khokhar
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lagda shayer aab ne kalam chuk layi hai

 

25 Jul 2012

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Nice one....te hun poori parhke te hor v vadhia laggi....

25 Jul 2012

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I am not really sure if the poet is Wasi Shah or Ahmad Faraz.. Anyhow nice nazam and nice rendition too...

25 Jul 2012

Jaspreet Singh
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Wonderful!! TFS, Sharanpreet and Arinder ji :)

25 Jul 2012

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