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Kashmakash - Story

SSA Doston....vese te aj kal kujh khaas likh nhi paundi main....n story te kde vi nhi likhi main....its my first attempt....punjabi ch type karna mere lyi bohat hi aukha hai....te o vi ik story....so main roman ch hi post kar rhi aa.......hope tusi apna samma kadd k meri story nu paddoge.....

 

Kashmakash

 

(Part 1)

 

 

 

Aksar menu inj lagda hai….k main kise sunsaan jaga to hundi hoyi kise raah ja kise cheez di talaash kardi bhatak rhi aa….challi ja rhi aa…challi ja rhi aa…ik na mukkan vale safar te….pta ni kadon ton te pta ni kithe tak….aur aj inj chalde chalde ik ajehi thaa’n upar pohachni aa….jo bohat haneri hai…aini haneri…… k menu apna aap tak nhi diss reha….. bohat zor la k jdo main dekhan di koshish kardi aa….te menu disda hai…k main ik kamre ch aa….dooooor…..os kamre ch koi disda hai…main awaz deni aa…k koi hai…per o kujh bolda hi nhi….menu unj vi hanere to bohat darr lagda hai…te aj apne aap nu ais jaga kalleya khada dekh hath pair odda hi phull rhe san…..

 

pher thoda hor zor la k jdo main os hanere ch dekhan di koshish kardi aa…te main dekheya…k koi baneya hoya peya hai ik manje upar….kujh puraniya jehiya zanzeera’n ch….aur main apne kadam darde darde os vall vadha deni aa….os vele mere dimaag ch kujh ajeha nhi hai…k main apne kadam ais lyi os vall vadha rhi aa,,,k osnu azaad karva ska ja kujh…eh te mera apna darr hai….jo menu os vall vadhan te majbur kar reha hai….k shayad ais sunsan jagah te main osda te oh mera sahara bann jave…….per jive hi thoda door jani aa….sab kujh kise hanere ch kho janda hai…

 

aur pher jive….. achanak…. main apne aap nu hi os bannan ch mehsus kardi aa…..te menu ehsas hunda hai…k o jo hun tak koi hor baneya hoya jaap reha si menu…oh hor koi nhi…main hi si… te kive mera hi ang ang zanzeera’n de naal bandheya hoya hai…... te pher shuru hundi hai meri aina zanzeera’n naal ik ajeeb kashmakash…… main jinna apne aap nu chhudaun di koshish kardi aa…onna hi aina zanzeera’n ch kasseya hoya paundi aa….te hun tak jo kamra menu hanera jaap reha si…os asal ch meriya akhan te pyi hoyi patti karke si….jo aini kass k bandhi hoyi si…k meri palka tak nhi si hil pa rhia…akha’n diya putliya te door di gall si….os vele sirf menu mere kann hi azaad jaap rhe san…jinna nu ais khamoshi da shor sunan lyi shayad jaan k azaad chadd dita geya si…..aur mere bull…jo shayad aina sehak gye si k bolan di koshish karna te ki…farkan to vi darr rhe si ….aur saah….oh te kujh is tarah mere sareer de andar bahar ho rhe san…jive o mere lyi ja mere jeun di zarurat lyi nhi…kise hukam ja bandish karke bus chup chaap apna kamm karde hon…….

 

Aur aithon shuru hoya ik ajeeb silsila ja kva te ik anchahyea rishta…mera…ais hanere da….te aina zanzeera’n da…………….

 

 

 

(Part 2)

 

 

 

Hun tak menu ais hanere di aadat pe challi si….hun ais ton darr nhi lagda si….shayad ais ne menu te main aisnu apna leya si….zanzeera’n di ki gall kara….eh te mere sareer naal kujh ais kadar judd gayia san….k aina ton bagair te main apne sareer di hond hi adhuri jaapan lag gyi si…aina di chuban hun mainu mithi japan lag gyi si……..

 

Pher ik din achanak….roz di tara…….main aida hi banni hoyi si…k ais khamoshi de shor nu cheerde hoye ik chhoti jehi aahat mere kanna ch payi…jisne mere sunn pye dimag nu apni val khicheya…ik khushboi….jo aini tez si…k lakh mere na chahun te vi meri nakk thai ho mere saaha’n ch ghulan di koshish karn lag payi…. Jis naal ik ajeeb jehi bechaini mere sareer andar chidan lag payi…aisa menu pehla kde mehsus nhi hoya si….te menu eh tak nhi si pta lag reha k eh bechaini menu changi lar rhi aa ja marhi…ja pher main os change ja marhe di had to paar ajehi jaga te aa…jithe ais khushboi te ais aahat naal hoye aina ahesaasa’n nu mehsus karke main koi jurm karta hove……

 

oh aahat jo pehla dooron aaundi jaap rhi si…haule haule o menu apne val aaundi mehsush hon lag pyi…inj lagda si k pta ni khaure koi bohat kahli ch aa..ais karke apne tez kdma naal nirantar meri vall vadhi ja reha hai.…. nede…hor nede…hor nede….thoda hor nede….ik dum nede…..aur khushboi…. O hun tak aini teevra ho chukki si…k ais tara japda si…jive eh kamra te mere saah hamesha to hi ais khushboi naal mehak rhe ron….aur ais gall ne menu is kadar hor bechain karta….k ik vari pher meri apni zanzeera’n naal kashmakash shuru ho gyi… per shayad ais vari main onha zanzeera’n to nhi…ais anchahi aahat ja khushboi to bhajjna chahundi si……khaure aise mahol nu main apni kismat mann baithi si te aj lag reha si…k eh jo vi koi hai…meri ais kismat nu vi mere to khoh layega……n ais vari main eh nhi hon deyagi…….bhave kujh hoje…eh soch meri apni zanzeera’n naal kashmakash hor tez ho gyi……


To be continued...........

 

24 Aug 2011

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