Notice: Undefined index: HTTP_ACCEPT_ENCODING in /home/jppl4xl3dfxh/public_html/configuration.php on line 8
Kashmakash - Story (2) :: punjabizm.com
Punjabi Literature
 View Forum
 Create New Topic
 Search in Forums
  Home > Communities > Punjabi Literature > Forum > messages
Mandeep Kaur
Mandeep
Posts: 329
Gender: Female
Joined: 27/Aug/2009
Location: New Delhi
View All Topics by Mandeep
View All Posts by Mandeep
 
Kashmakash - Story (2)

Dear frnds........Jina ne first 2 parts nhi padde...o pehla o padd len tan jo story properly samajh aaye.....

 

Kashmakash

 

 

 

 

(Part 3)

 

 

 

Main hale apni te zanzeera’n di kashmakash ch hi si…..k menu mehsus hoya….k ais kashmaksh ch hun main kalli nhi aa….koi hor vi si jo mere naal aa k  rall gya si….aur apni pur zor koshish laga reha si k menu aina bandhna to azaad kara ske…..sach kva te eh anjani te anchahi madad menu sweekar nhi si…. ehi soch main apne hatha’n naal osde hatha’n nu jhatk ta….jo zanzeera’n kholan di koshish kar rhe san…osne pher koshish kiti…aur main onna hi zor di  pher osnu parre nu dhakeya…o jitho vi zanzeera’n kholan di koshish karda….main osnu parre hata dendi…kade hatha’n naal te kde paira’n naal……hun tak ik navi kashmaksh osde te mere vichkaar shuru ho chukki si….aur oh aini tez si k assi na chahunde hoye vi os ch hor ton hor uljhi ja rhe si………

 

Aur pher achanak….main mehsus kita…..k mere hatha’n diya ungla di vitha’n bhar gayia ne…..te ainiya kass k bhariya ne k lagda hi nhi si k kde koi vith si vi aina vichkar……. meriya latta’n te vi ik bhaar pe chukka si….. kise di choh mere jism de har hisse naal juddi ja rhi si…ja kva…te mere jism ch khubi ja rhi si……..

 

Saah jo hun tak bus aaun nu hi aa rhe san…kise di khushboi naal bhare ja rhe si aur aine aukhe ho gye si k menu onha nu sambhalna aukha ho chaleya si….bulla’n da farkna shuru ho gya si kyunki kise di choh ne onha nu aina namm karta si jive sokke di mari dharti te baarish di pehli fuhaar pe gyi hove….kann jo hun tak sirf khamoshi sunan de aadi san….pehli vaar kise de dil di dhadkan nu sunn rhe san…….

 

pta ni kive di si eh choh….jisne mere sareer ch ik ajeeb kambni cherh diti….aur main oston pehla ki kar rhi si ja ki soch rhi si ik dum bhul gyi…dimaag mera ik vari pher sunn pe gya….main eh tak bhul gyi k thodi der pehla main aise ton apne aap nu bachaun lyi eh kashmakash shuru kiti si te hun jdo mainu isnu hatauna chahida….main kujh kar hi nhi rhi aa…..ja karna nhi chahundi aa….pta ni…….aur pher shuru hoya ik ajeeb silsila…..te ik navi kashmakash….jo ais vari mere te zanzeera’n vichkar nhi si….balik…zanzeera’n vichkar do jisma….do rooha’n vich si………

 

 

 

(Part 4)



Hun tak main poori tarah naal osdi giraft ch si….har kisam di zaddo zehad rukk gyi si saade doha’n valon… jive apna aap samarpan karta hove ik duje nu……. dono apne apne karam ja dharm chadd shayad kise hor hi duniya ch leen ho gye si…..ajehi duniya jo na os sochi si na main…..tapish naal saade pinde bhakh rhe si….per rooh ch jive kise ne burf vangu thand pa ti hove…..eh ehsaas vi kinne ajeeb hunde ne… eh menu pehli vaar pta lagga si…..

Thoda hosh sambhleya te mehsus hoya…..k kive hauli hauli meri zanzeera’n apne aap khuli ja rhia ne…. ik ik kar mere saare bandhan khuli ja rhe san….eh kive ho reha si main hairan si!....pta ni eh ehsaasa’n di tapish naal pighal rahe san….ja kise hor vajah naal…..main ais bare na sochna hi theek samjheya……

 

aur pher haule jehe mere jism to oh roohani bhaar vi leh gya......rooh te pehla hi azaad ho chuki si shayad…mera jism vi azaad si hun….sariya’n zanzeera’n khul chukiya san….mera rom rom os khushi nu mehsus kar pa reha si…..per eh ki….. hale vi kujh adhura si….oh ik akhir bandhan…..meria akhha te banni o kali syaah patti….jo hale vi osse tara bandhi hoyi si……

 

aur ik vari pher o roohani choh mehsus hoyi menu apni akha’n te bandhi os patti upar….te ik akhiri kashmakash….meri zindgi ch aayi ais navi roshni te vareya to thehre os hanere vichkar…… main gumm si ik vaar pher  kyunki mehsus kar pa rhi si….k dona ne hi apni saari taakat jhok diti hai….jive dona cho koi vi menu haarna nhi si chahunda………..kyunki eh kashmakash hanere te roshni vichkar nhi….mere te meri kismat vichkar si……aur achanak ik tez prakash ne meriya akha’n chundiya diti……

 

Sooraj diya sidhiya kirna mere muh te pe rhia ne….chhat te pukha oven hi slow speed naal chal reha hai….duje kamre cho gurbaani di tez awaz aa rhi hai….aur menu disi meri maa….jo kamre ch andhar bahar hundi hoyi mere aj vi der naal uthan te budbud kari ja rhi si….ohhhhhhhhhhhhhhh te eh koi sufna si….main apne aap to pucheya…bdi hairani naal…..nhi nhi….. eh sufna nhi ho sakda….main apne aap nu keha….. kyunki mere pinde ch tapish te bulla’n ch nami hale vi mehsus ho rhi hai….. aur main aasa paasa ik vari pher bde gaur naal dekheya…..aas paas de mahual nu dekh k te ehi prateet ho reha si….k eh ik sufna hi si…..per mera mann nhi mann reha si…. ….

 

Aur aise kashmakash nu mann ch basaye main uth k baith gyi apne bistre te…..aur achanak kujh  dhalkeya meri galla’n ton…. main fatafat almari muhre sheese samne ja khaloti….aur bohat gaur naal dekheya apne aap nu….. ik hanzu si….jo meri galla’n to thale nu dhali ja reha si……khaure kis gall di aini kahli si osnu apna vajud mere jism ton mitaun di…..main hairan si…..eh kitho’n aaya….kyunki meriya akha’n te sukiya ne…..aur main sheeshe muhre khadi apne aap nu pagla vangu dekhi hi ja rhi si…dimag mera ik vari pher sunn hai….kyunki o hun ik navi kashmaksh ch hai…..mere sufne….hakeekat…azaadi….bandhan….te…..ais hanzu de vajud di kashmakash…………………………..

 

 

Mandeep

 

24 Aug 2011

sandeep singh
sandeep
Posts: 249
Gender: Male
Joined: 30/Aug/2009
Location: amritsar
View All Topics by sandeep
View All Posts by sandeep
 

bahut sohni koshish aa story likhan di.....mandeep...padd k wadia laggi....te end bahut hi wadia...kadi na khatm hon wali ik kashmkash....jo har insan de andr chaldi rehndi aa vakhre vakhre roop ch

03 Sep 2011

Mandeep Kaur
Mandeep
Posts: 329
Gender: Female
Joined: 27/Aug/2009
Location: New Delhi
View All Topics by Mandeep
View All Posts by Mandeep
 
thanks Sandeep for reading it n liking it too.....menu pta aini lammi story read karna o vi net te bohat aukha lagda :) main aap kyi vari avoid kar jani aa :)))) Ik koshish kiti hai kujh ehsaasa'n nu likhan di....thanks jo tusi time kdd k read kiti meri story :)
04 Sep 2011

Reply