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Sukhbir Singh
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ਜ਼ਿੰਦਗੀ

 

ਬੀਤ ਗਈ ਪੂਰੀ ਜ਼ਿੰਦਗੀ,
ਜ਼ਿੰਦਗੀ ਵਿੱਚ ਕੁਝ ਕਰ ਨਾ ਸਕਿਆ


ਪੜ੍ਹਾਈਆਂ ਵਿੱਚ ਵੀ ਰਿਹਾ ਢਿੱਲਾ
ਸੱਚ ਆਖਾਂ ਬਹੁਤਾ ਪੜ੍ਹ ਨਾ ਸਕਿਆ


ਸ਼ਾਇਰੀ ਦਾ ਇੱਕ ਸ਼ੌਕ ਸੀ ਬੱਸ
ਸ਼ਾਇਰ ਵੀ ਚੰਗਾ ਬਣ ਨਾ ਸਕਿਆ


ਲੋਕੀ ਆਖਦੇ ਸੀ ਭੋਲਾ ਮੈਨੂੰ
ਚਤੁਰਾਈ ਸਿਆਣਪ ਦਿਖਾ ਨਾ ਸਕਿਆ


ਸ਼ਾਇਦ ਇਸੀ ਕਰ ਕੇ ਸੱਚ ਆਖਾਂ 
ਮਿੱਤਰ ਕਿਸੀ ਨੂੰ ਬਣਾ ਨਾ ਸਕਿਆ 

08 Feb 2017

Gurjant Takipur
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Nice Poem bai ji.

 

08 Feb 2017

Sukhbir Singh
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Thanks vg 

08 Feb 2017

Manminder Mann
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Great Lines!

I think you are inspired from Punjabi singers. Your Shayari resembles with some famous songs. Like this one is close to Sharry Mann's song "Koi Karja Bewafai" and its good. Keep up listening to their latest songs like Shaadi Dot Com Sharry Mann.

08 Feb 2017

MANINDER SINGH
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bahut vadhiya veer....mehnat karde raho.....ek din kamyabi milugi jaroor veer....god bless you...

12 Feb 2017

Sukhbir Singh
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dhanvad maninder veer ji
13 Feb 2017

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