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hardeep kaur dhindsa
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manukh ate pashu

eh kavita ohna sarean nu sambodit ,jinha nu parmatma ne kise bhukhey dhid nu bharan de samrath baneyea hai,jo kise da khali adyea hath bhar sakde hun......

 

bhukhey baalan d aandar boldi ae,

rajean dian jeiban akhan naal he,

tatoldi ae

aaswandh hai

khabrey ohdi khali jhol bhar jaavey,

jara kann la k sunn

tainu sunangian siskian

milangey anbhol bachpan dian

marian kahanian de paatar

hauke bhar reha baalmann

jo sheeshey 'cho khadone takkan

de jurm ch maar khayi khada hai

bada shor hai

ohna tarlean da

jo maalak d kutt kha upjea hai

sunn tu jara dhyan naal sunn

koshosh tan kar sunan d

par

j tainu kuj na sunea

tan

samaj lavin

manukh ate pashu hon d kasuti te tu tull gaya hai

manukh da jaama pehan k

pashu joon bhog reha hai

oh tainu

aje manukh banan ch sama lagna

ek gal yaad rakhin

bhukhey baalmann d andar tan

ro k chup kar jayegi

par !!!!!

sadi manukhta kado janam lai payegi ???

kithey thaan lai payegi ???

23 Apr 2010

ਕੁਲਜੀਤ  ਚੀਮਾਂ
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no words can explain the greatness of the lines.... beyond words...

brought me into tears !!!


Bless you !!!

23 Apr 2010

hardeep kaur dhindsa
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thanx kuljit ji

 

asal ch kise bachey d haalat deikhi c pb ch,oh dimag ch he hai aje v.

 

ek incident sunauana chauangi

 

sadey college canteen ch ek 9 ku saal da ladka kam karda c. main aapna lec lain to baad chah lae canteen msg karna,and chah har time ohdu auani ,jad mera next lec hon wala hona..

ek din main os ladke nu thoda khij k keha k tainu time naal auan da nae pata,tu 10.waje tak chah lai k aaya kar ... os da jawab c ..madam ji mere kol ghadi nae haigi....ohda eh ans bada he tarley wala c..yakeen maana aaj v yaad kardi haan tan mann bhar jaanda... duje din main ohnu sasti jahi ghadi leyaa k diti..and oh inna khush c..hor kise nu chah davey na davey..mere lae time naal aa jaanda c...dekhea javey ..rabb da roop kahuan wale bachey... sada shayad koi leikha de rahe hun...mann bhar jaanda soch k

23 Apr 2010

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Great.. Here also i said i m speechless, no words.. Hanji hardeep ji rona ta aa hi janda hai bacheyan di haalat dekh ke.. And is maamle ch main bda imotional haan. Mere to kuch vi sambhav hove karda haan. Ta hi dil nu tassali hundi hai.

23 Apr 2010

hardeep kaur dhindsa
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ya satti ji... tuhade efforts barey pata hai..es lae tuhadi respect hor wadh jaandi hai.

bada aukha hunda hai,jado aapan bebas khad sab dekh rahe hunde haan.

 

naaley inni tindi kar k facebook te meri,hun hardeep JI kaho,changi gal hai..shabaash

23 Apr 2010

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yeah bahut waar eda hunda ki ehna wall dekh ke apna aap lachaar laggan lag painda, asin apne layi educated hoye, apne layi jobs... sab kuj apne aap layi te ehna layi asin kuj vi nai kar sakdey.

 

Thora jeha kuj karan di koshish changi hundi aa but je global poverty level te dekhiye tan duniya parey ton parey payi aa...

 

Pata nai rabb ne eh division kis basis te kiti aa...

 

 

 

 

23 Apr 2010

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ਬਹੁਤ ਹੀ ਖੁਬਸੂਰਤ ਸਤਰਾਂ ਹਰਦੀਪ ਜੀ...

 

ਬਹੁਤ ਚੰਗੀ ਸੋਚ ਆਪ ਜੀ ਦੀ..

 

ਮੈ ਤੇ ਏਹੀ ਕਹੂੰਗਾ ਤੇਰੀਆ ਬੇਪਰਵਾਹੀਆਂ ਰੱਬਾਂ ਕੀ-ਕੀ ਖੇਡ ਰਚਾਵੇ.....

 

ਮੇਰੀ ਅਰਦਾਸ ਰੱਬ ਦੇ ਘਰ ਏਹੋ ਹੁੰਦੀ ਕਿ ਰੁੱਖੀ-ਮਿੱਸੀ ਸਭ ਨੂੰ ਦੇਵੇ...ਬਾਕੀ ਡਾਢੇ ਦੀ ਮਰਜੀ ਏ ਹਰਦੀਪ ਜੀ....

 

ਚੰਗਾ ਲਿਖਿਆ ਤੁਸੀਂ..ਸਿਜਦਾ ਮੇਰਾ ਆਪ ਦੀ ਸੋਚ ਨੂੰ....

24 Apr 2010

Satwinder  Satti
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@hardeep ji.. Hahahahaha. Thanku

24 Apr 2010

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@kuljit ji aapa apne walo jini koshish hundi hai kar ta sakde haan..

24 Apr 2010

hardeep kaur dhindsa
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thanx lakhi

 

kuljit ji and satti ji tusi bahut he emotional vichar diteyhun,eh bahut he jaruri hun.

jad tak tuhade warge lok hun,tad tak aas da deeva balda rahega...

24 Apr 2010

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