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ਕੁਕਨੂਸ  ...............
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ਮੇਰੇ ਤੋਂ ਨਹੀਂ ਹੁੰਦਾ..........

mere to nahin hunda...........

k avein  dukha dvan kise da dil.......

apni haume di santushti lyi........

k "manak moti sbh amolve".....

sanu bchpan to sikhaya gya hai.....

 

 

 

mere to nahin hunda.........

k kr dvaan panne kaale.........

likh likh k kujh v be-sir pair da.......

q k lafzaan di izzat krni...

sada virsa jo hai.........

krn nu ki hai....

main v kr skda haan gumaan.......

k haan main v "likhda haan".

par agle hi pal..........

dheh jnda hai mere ghmand da mahal........

dhikkardi hai meri aatma mainu..

t main sharm-shaar hoya.......

khud to munh lukonda firda haan.....

fr pta lgda hai..........

aje ta tu kujh v nahi una agge.......

jo aisa likh gye.........

k shahkaar hogya........

 

 

 

 

mere to nahin hunda...........

k main sver to hi....

kalam hath ch lai k ghumda rhaan...

t apne "kavi" hon de bharm nu paalda rhaan..........

main ta ik aam insaan haan.......

jo  kavita nahi.......

roti paani naal dhidh bharda hai..........

par apni us rooh da ki kraan....

jis di khuraak ta..

.peele patre valiyaan kitaabaan ch luki baithi hai........

 

 

 

mere to nahin hunda........

k main likhda rhan mohabatt de geet.......

t andekha krdvaan.....

tutti chappal t pate jhagge vali mangti nu.....

mainu manzur hai khauna....

isdi kavita ch ras di kami hai....

bjaye isde k koi akhe...

is bnde ch ehsaas di kami hai.......

mere to nahin likhi jaandi pyaar di kavita..........

jd tk sadiyaan faslaan tbah hono nahi htdiyaan..........

t mandi ch gille jhone de dher t baitha sada baba........

apne hanju poonjh ghar nahi part aunda.......

 

 

 

 

 

mere to nahin hunda........

k main vi shummar ho jaavan.......

mnukhaan di awaaz to dr k.....

khudkushi di surakheya bhaalde lokaan vich.....

k main oh nahi jo haar jaavanga zindagi di jaddo-jehd

t bina lre hi sutt dvanga apna tarkash.....

q k main t oh haan.......

jo siveyaan tk vi jhoojhda hi jaanda hai.........

 





18 Oct 2010

Gurminder singh
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grt thght kuknoos ggggggggg


kmaal da likhde o,,,,,,,,,,,,,


,,,,tfs,,,,,,,,,jionde vasde raho .........

18 Oct 2010

Jass Panaichan
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ਬਹੁਤ ਸੋਹਣਾ ਲਿਖਿਆ ਜੀ .........ਪਰ ਕੋਸ਼ਿਸ਼ ਕਰੋ ਜੇ ਪੰਜਾਬੀ ਚ ਵੀ ਟਾਈਪ ਹੋ ਜਾਵੇ ਤਾ ਹੋਰ impact  ਪੈਂਦਾ ਏ ਤੇ ਪੜਨ ਵਾਲੇ ਨੂੰ ਵੀ ਅਨੰਦ ਮਿਲਦਾ ਏ ........ਬਹੁਤ ਸੋਹਣਾ ਲਿਖਦੇ ਹੋ ਤੇ ਹਮੇਸ਼ਾਂ ਲਿਖਦੇ ਰਹੋ ਜੀ

18 Oct 2010

Avrooz Kaur Grewal
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such a great creation...!! bahut hi sohna likheya tusi hamesha di tra !! tuhada likhan da andaaz bahut hi nirala hai !! keep writing n keep sharing !! tfs
18 Oct 2010

ਕੁਕਨੂਸ  ...............
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thanks..............

@ gurminder : thanks a lot.........

 

 

 

@ jass: tuc jo akhya usda ehsaas minu pehlaan to e hai.bt meri prblm a k minu pbi ch sahi tra type krna nahi aunda........t galt-malt pbi likhn nalon i prefer english.......

 

 

@avrooz: thanks ji........

19 Oct 2010

...BLKR ...
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ਬਹੁਤ ਹੀ ਵਧੀਆ ਿਲਿਖਆ ਹੈ ਜੀ............

19 Oct 2010

Harjit Pal Singh
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bahut sahi gal kiti ae.. bahut e vadiya.. I'll send you the software required

19 Oct 2010

ਕੁਕਨੂਸ  ...............
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thanks.........

@harjit: thanks for your kind gesture........but the problem is still here........

20 Oct 2010

Amrinder Singh
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bahut sohna likheya...

20 Oct 2010

Harjit Pal Singh
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please explain the problem and let me handle that

20 Oct 2010

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