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Navjot Uppal
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Mitti diaN MoortaN

Mitti diaN MoortaN ne dil sada Moh lya
Jado Dill kita Asi Ohle Beh k Rooh lya


Yaad Hai Nishani Teri Rakhi Seene Sambh k
HijraaN da Daag nal HanjuaN de Dho lya



Tu kade akhya mai han Parchaayi Teri
Roshni Mukki te Tu V Passa Vat k khlo gya



Sochya Si Puugu Yaari KacheyaN Te Tar k V
Eho Jhutha Vaada Le k KabraN Ch So lya



Maut Se ge Sacchi Jehri aayi Vaada karke
Laariyan Terian ne Sanu Dunia ToN kho lya

 

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24 Sep 2010

aman Mann
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ਬਹੁਤ ..... ਖੂਬ

24 Sep 2010

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Gud One Navjot G


Ehda writer name mainu v nai pta par meri diary vich eh kavita main note kiti hoyee a


thnks to share it here ...............

24 Sep 2010

Seerat Sandhu
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nice poem

bahut hi sohni kavita hai ji but main eh pehlaan Gurpinder ji di profile vich parhi c !!

24 Sep 2010

Ruby Singh ਔਗੁਣਾਂ ਦੇ ਨਾਲ   ਭਰਿਆ ਹਾਂ ਮੈਂ
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Bhut Vadiya

24 Sep 2010

Balihar Sandhu BS
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Bahut KHOOB...thanks for sharing NAVJOT JEE..!!

24 Sep 2010

Harsimran dhiman
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vadiya..................

24 Sep 2010

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