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| os rab ne mainu tusi ditte |
ohne mainu jindgi deni c
ohne ta e mainu tusi ditte
ohne mainu khushi deni c
ohne ta e mainu tusi ditte
ohne mainu rishte dene c
ohne ta e mainu tusi ditte
ohne mainu taakat deni
ohne ta e mainu tusi ditte
ohne mainu sabar dena c
ohne ta e mainu tusi ditte
ohne mainu pyar bakhshna c
ohne ta e mainu tusi ditte
ohne mainu apna aap dena c
apne roop ch tuhanu mainu ditta
Navdeep kaur
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01 Oct 2013
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waah,..........very good,...........a positive approach wali poetry,...........bohat khubb likhea,.............duawaan
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01 Oct 2013
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'ਕੌਣ ਦਿੱਤੇ' ਇਹ ਤਾਂ ਦੱਸਿਆ ਈ ਨਹੀਂ ?
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01 Oct 2013
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ਚੰਗੀ ਕੋਸ਼ਿਸ਼ ਹੈ ,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,
ਜੀਓ,,,
ਚੰਗੀ ਕੋਸ਼ਿਸ਼ ਹੈ ,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,
ਜੀਓ,,,
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01 Oct 2013
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| thanks |
thanks to all of u,,,,,
tusi ditte nu main byan kar dita a.
jindgi mil gayi...khushi mil gayi...sab kuj mil gea...
ahna da nam v likhya a...RAB mil gya.....
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02 Oct 2013
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nice one ..
par sab to vadh changa lgia divroop bhaji da comment vekh ke ... oh bahut soch vichar to baad comment krde ne ...
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03 Oct 2013
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