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Amandeep Kaur
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Chhoota jo tera haath to hum toot ke roye

 

Chhoota jo tera haath to hum toot ke roye,
Tum jo na rahe saath to hum toot ke roye,

Chahat ki tamanna thi aur zakhm diye tumne,
Paayi jo yeh saughaat to hum toot ke roye,

Imkaan na tha door talak tajdeed-e-talluq ka,
Dekhe jo yeh halaat to hum toot ke roye,

Anjaan the hum ab tak dard ki surat se,
Huyi jo mulaqaat to hum toot ke roye,

Logon se bohat poocha sabab veerani ka,
Jo soojhi na koi baat to hum toot ke roye,

Thi dhoop bohat taiz har simt judayi ki,
Barsi jo na barsaat to hum toot ke roye,

Din bhar to rahe chhup ke duniya ki nazron se,
Bheegi jo seyaah raat to hum toot ke roye,

Samjha tha sadaa tujh ko apna hi ik hissa,
Tukrron main bati zaat to hum toot ke roye,

Hum karte rahe kyun uss chaand ki khawhish,
Yaad aayi jo aukaat to hum toot ke roye..........!

 

By: God  Knows 

07 Jan 2015

JAGJIT SINGH
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ਅਤਿ ਸੁੰਦਰ - ਇਹ ਤਾਂ ਮਾਸਟਰ ਪੀਸ ਹੈ |
 
ਇਹ ਕਲਾਮ ਕਿਸੇ ਮੰਜੇ ਹੋਏ ਲਿਖਾਰੀ ਦੀ ਕਲਮ ਦਾ ਕਮਾਲ ਹੈ |
ਸ਼ੇਅਰ ਕਰਨ ਲਈ ਧੰਨਵਾਦ ਅਮਨਦੀਪ ਜੀ |

ਅਤਿ ਸੁੰਦਰ - ਇਹ ਤਾਂ ਮਾਸਟਰ ਪੀਸ ਹੈ ਜੀ |

 

ਇਹ ਕਲਾਮ ਕਿਸੇ ਮੰਜੇ ਹੋਏ ਲਿਖਾਰੀ ਦੀ ਕਲਮ ਦਾ ਕਮਾਲ ਹੈ |


ਸ਼ੇਅਰ ਕਰਨ ਲਈ ਧੰਨਵਾਦ ਅਮਨਦੀਪ ਜੀ |

 

07 Jan 2015

Amandeep Kaur
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Thankew Sir Ji

07 Jan 2015

Gurpreet  Dhillon
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very nice Amn

08 Jan 2015

Amandeep Kaur
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Thankew Gurpreet 

08 Jan 2015

Gurpreet Bassian
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bahut khoob mam ji..jionde vasde raho

11 Jan 2016

Amandeep Kaur
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Thank You Gurpreet ji :)

12 Jan 2016

sukhpal singh
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Bohat wadhiya likhde ho aap Aman g,............superb written,...............great 

15 Jan 2016

R B Sohal
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Very nice ji..

16 Jan 2016

Amandeep Kaur
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Thank you R B Ji :)

17 Jan 2016

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