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Sonali kaul
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ਸਪਨੇ ਮੇਰੇ ਚ

Sapne mere 'ch nit menu milne layi aanda e 

Dil diyan sab reejhan jaahir kar dinde , injh akhan 'ch meri oh takda e 

 

Jad bhi main manjhe apne di ik nukkre payi hundi aa 

Pta nahi kamre meri di baari 'ch kad oh andat nass anda e 

 

Kade akhe menu Oh Sona , kade Guddo rani bulanda e 

Apni meethdi jehi awaaz oh aande hi mere kannan 'ch paanda e 

 

Meri sutti payi nu , mathe mere te apne bullan nu chhuhanda e 

Mere khulle uljhe hoye vaalan nu phir oh suljhanda e 

 

Menu hole jihe jaga ke , apne valon likhiya pyaar jiha geet sunanda e

Pyaar apne da jikar ajeeb jihe mere agge kujh lafzan 'ch karda e

 

kujh pal beeta ke oh naal mere phir usse baari rahin vaapis chala janda e 

Mere sapne 'ch vaar vaar har raat oh injh hi karda e 

 

Jad sarghi vele uthdi nu main takdi han chaar chufere ve

Tenu labhann main vang shudayian jandi han nagar dhandori ve

 

Phir ik din akh meri rabba meriya ! kujh ajiha sapna takdi e 

Eh jo sapne 'ch aanda hai nit mere , peechle janam da maahiya e 

 

Jaan ke badi hairani hoyi kayi janman da saak assada e 

 

Is janme oh apne geet bade hi sureele likhda e 

Tahio akhan sapne 'ch menu kyun inne geet sunanda e 

 

Likhda hai oh geet ajihe sun ke ho jandi rooh nasedi ve

Apne lafzan 'te bollan naal zindagi meri 'ch ik navi bahaar le aanda e 

 

Mukhda usda kise deeve di lau vangra chamke ve

Jo sabna di haneri duniya 'ch chanani le aanda e ..........

04 Feb 2017

Gurjant Takipur
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Tuhadi poem changi hai ji umeed hai agge v parhde rahange.

Likhna kadon suru kitta c tusi.

06 Feb 2017

Sonali kaul
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Bahut bahut dhanvaad meri hosla afjai karan layi. main likh ta bachpan to rahi si par peechle do salaan to regular likh rahi han.

06 Feb 2017

Gurjant Takipur
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Koi book v aayi ji tuhadi main apni poem v paa ditti ji site te baad vich nazar mari ki tuhadi poem v hajir hai "Supna" kavita  likhde ho jan kujh hor v je tusi apni kavita kisse hor site te upload karna chunde ho tan dasna ji ik hor site hai jithe tusi apni kavita paa sakde ho.baki kade paper vich send kitti tusi koi kavita main kade kade kosish karke send kar dinda han kade kade lagg jandi hai.story parh laina ji meri fir dasna kive laggi koi kammii howe tan dasna ji main door karan di kosissh karanga ji.

              Gurjant Takipur

06 Feb 2017

Sonali kaul
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Nahi main aje tak koi book nahi publish karayi...te main tuhadi kavita bhi jaroor padhangi...baaki eh chagi gall hai je tussi akhbaar 'ch bhi dende ho apni kavita....

07 Feb 2017

MANINDER SINGH
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bahut sohni kirat tuhadi.......

12 Feb 2017

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