story ta bai ji bahut hi kmaal likhi e tusin ......but end bahut sad ho gia .....par ih kahani te isde sikh kirdaar sade ate samuchi sikh kaum 'te klank ne .....suarth di boo sabh hadda-banne tod gaee.......je ih sachi kahani e ya haqeekat naal mel khandi e...ta bahut hi maadi ghatna e .....injh nhi c hona chahida .....

tuhada likhan dhang vadhia e...keep it up