Punjabi Poetry
 View Forum
 Create New Topic
  Home > Communities > Punjabi Poetry > Forum > messages
Kulwinder Kaur
Kulwinder
Posts: 74
Gender: Female
Joined: 13/Aug/2012
Location: Zira
View All Topics by Kulwinder
View All Posts by Kulwinder
 
'Supne hi dekhdi rahi'
Supne hi dekhdi rahi main,haqikat vich ta aai hi nahi...................,...,,.....mann vich hi sochdi rai,hotha te ta leayi hi nai..................,..............na dasea kise nu,te na hi puchea kise ton..,apne hi mannkathat fesale sunodi rahi main..........,supne hi dekhdi rahi........,....................apne papan nu chopun lyi,darr darr k jeondi rahi..............apne kitee gunahan nu main,apne ton hi chopundi rahi,,......,.,.apne ton ta chopaea hi main,viche rabb nu v nasamj banondi rahi.........na samj main eh gunhan kita,gunah ton vada gunah kita.........supne hi dekhdi rahi...............................apne aap nu main samjdi, rabb di mehram rahi,..........,papan de bahar le bandar,samjea main tan lokh rahi.......hanera hadh janda chann aa janda,jad chahe jive chahe o jaroor honda..,na o chohnda na main karda,papan da eh ghada khali hunda.........supne hi dekhdi rahi,haqikat vich tan aai hi nahi..........
08 Nov 2012

_Preet Dhillon_ .
_Preet Dhillon_
Posts: 577
Gender: Female
Joined: 22/Aug/2010
Location: New Delhi
View All Topics by _Preet Dhillon_
View All Posts by _Preet Dhillon_
 

vadiyaa a g..


08 Nov 2012

ਬਿੱਟੂ ਕਲਾਸਿਕ  .
ਬਿੱਟੂ ਕਲਾਸਿਕ
Posts: 2441
Gender: Male
Joined: 12/Nov/2011
Location: New Delhi
View All Topics by ਬਿੱਟੂ ਕਲਾਸਿਕ
View All Posts by ਬਿੱਟੂ ਕਲਾਸਿਕ
 

ਸੁਪਨੇ ਹੀ ਦੇਖਦੀ ਰਹੀ ਮੈਂ ,ਹਕ਼ੀਕਤ ਵਿਚ ਤਾਂ ਆਈ ਹੀ   ਨਹੀ ...................,...,,.....
ਮਨ ਵਿੱਚ ਹੀ ਸੋਚਦੀ ਰਹੀ ,ਹੋਠ੍ਹਾ ਤੇ  ਤਾਂ ਲਿਆਈ ਹੀ  ਨਹੀਂ ..................,..............
ਨਾਂ  ਦਸਿਆ ਕਿਸੇ ਨੂੰ , ਤੇ ਨਾਂ ਹੀ  ਪੁਛਿਆ ਕਿਸੇ ਤੋਂ ..,ਆਪਣੇ ਹੀ ਮਨ ਘੜ੍ਹਤ  ਫੈਸਲੇ ਸੁਨਾਓਦੀ ਰਹੀ ਮੈਂ ..........,ਸੁਪਨੇ ਹੀ ਦੇਖਦੀ ਰਹੀ........,.................. ਆਪਣੇ  ਪਾਪਾਂ  ਨੂੰ  ਛਿਪਾਉਣ  ਲਈ,  ਡਰ ਡਰ  ਕੇ  ਜਿਓਦੀ  ਰਹੀ ..............ਆਪਣੇ  ਕੀਤੇ  ਗੁਨਾਹਾਂ  ਨੂੰ  ਮੈਂ , ਆਪਣੇ ਤੋਂ  ਹੀ  ਛਿਪਾਉਂਦੀ  ਰਹੀ ,,......,.,.ਆਪਣੇ  ਤੋਂ  ਤਾਂ  ਛਿਪਾਇਆ  ਹੀ  ਮੈਂ , ਵਿਚੇ  ਰੱਬ  ਨੂੰ  ਵੀ  ਨਾਸਮਝ  ਬਣਾਉਂਦੀ  ਰਹੀ .........ਨਾ  ਸਮਝ  ਮੈਂ  ਇਹ  ਗੁਨਾਹ  ਕੀਤਾ , ਗੁਨਾਹ  ਤੋਂ  ਵੱਡਾ  ਗੁਨਾਹ  ਕੀਤਾ .........ਸੁਪਨੇ ਹੀ ਦੇਖਦੀ ਰਹੀ...............................apne aap nu main samjdi, rabb di mehram rahi,..........,papan de bahar le bandar,samjea main tan lokh rahi.......hanera hadh janda chann aa janda,jad chahe jive chahe o jaroor honda..,na o chohnda na main karda,papan da eh ghada khali hunda.........supne hi dekhdi rahi,haqikat vich tan aai hi nahi..........

08 Nov 2012

Kulwinder Kaur
Kulwinder
Posts: 74
Gender: Female
Joined: 13/Aug/2012
Location: Zira
View All Topics by Kulwinder
View All Posts by Kulwinder
 
Thanx...preet and bittu g for like it.
08 Nov 2012

malkit thamanwal
malkit
Posts: 239
Gender: Male
Joined: 28/Nov/2011
Location: den haag
View All Topics by malkit
View All Posts by malkit
 
sohna likheyaaa ee g
08 Nov 2012

j singh
j
Posts: 2871
Gender: Male
Joined: 18/Nov/2011
Location: beautifull
View All Topics by j
View All Posts by j
 

Nycc......

08 Nov 2012

Kulwinder Kaur
Kulwinder
Posts: 74
Gender: Female
Joined: 13/Aug/2012
Location: Zira
View All Topics by Kulwinder
View All Posts by Kulwinder
 
Dhanwad 'malkit' and 'j' g.
09 Nov 2012

ਮਾਵੀ ƸӜƷ •♥•.¸¸.•♥•.
ਮਾਵੀ
Posts: 640
Gender: Male
Joined: 30/Mar/2009
Location: Chandigarh
View All Topics by ਮਾਵੀ
View All Posts by ਮਾਵੀ
 

khiyalat achhe ne .. jo veg shuru vich banheya si bohat e wadhia dhang nal banheya si parr oh ant tak nibhaya nahin gya .. .. hor mehnat krro , tusin bohat sohna likh lainde ho ..

14 Nov 2012

Reply