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Satvir Kaur jhali
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Dhiyaa Marjaniyaa………

Eh keho jehiaa rabba tu kitiaa ney

Dhiyaa marjaniya a kyu ditiyaa ney

Eh khel v tera das kaisa hai?

Dhi deyi othey jithey paisa hai

 

Dhi deyi na kisey gareeb ghar

Palniyaa paindiyaa ney jind tali dhar

Gareeb mapeya kol hunda na dhan koi

Jis taan ney lagdiyaa eh jaanda hai soi

Eh keho jehiaa rabba tu kitiaa ney

Dhiyaa marjaniya a kyu ditiyaa ney

 

 

Dhi vihaoun lyi hovey na jd dhan kol

Sakhey bhaai v jandey ney much morr

Gareeb mapeya da dukh vekhey koun

Palley hor na kuj bas reh janda hai roun

Eh keho jehiaa rabba tu kitiaa ney

Dhiyaa marjaniya a kyu ditiyaa ney

 

 

Dhiyaa baap dey sir da taaj hundiyaa

Eh maa di chuni di laaj hundiyaa

Wadey veera diya eh aanaakh hundiyaa

Pr pata ni kismataa kyu vakh hundiyaa

Eh keho jehiaa rabba tu kitiaa ney

Dhiyaa marjaniya a kyu ditiyaa ney

 

 

J sochiyey k bharun kyu mardey ney

Dhiyaa vekh kyu lok na jarrdey ney

Puch k vekh lo kisi gareeb u

Dhan hovey na dhee vihaoun nu

Tad mera v mann kurla uthda

Eh ritiaa kyu ho gyiaa KURITIAAN ney

Eh keho jehiaa rabba tu kitiaa ney

Dhiyaa marjaniya a kyu ditiyaa ney

 

 

 

BHUL CHUK MAAF JI…………..

01 Feb 2010

Satwinder  Satti
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Wow !! 

 

bhaut wdhiya hai satveer ji poori tasveer jhalakdi hai...

 

bade dina baad haazri lawayi hai???

really great one...

 

jaldi aa jaya karo..Good Job

 

Thanks

02 Feb 2010

Satwinder  Satti
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par hun soch badal rahi hai...

 

dhiyan ta sir da taaz hundiyan ne...

 

ehna kuritiyan nu door karn di lod hai..

 

tusi bahut wadhiya likheya.

 karari chot..

hats off u

02 Feb 2010

Amrinder Singh
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bahut wadhiya satveer......

well said....

 

great job.. keep sharing..

02 Feb 2010

jasbir singh
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Satvir Kaur ji bahut khub rachna likhi hai

kujh akharan diyea galtiyea ne jo samajhan

ch aoukh dyendyea ne ho sake taan punjabi

font ch likhan di koshish karna ji bahut wadyea

lagega..........

03 Feb 2010

Gursaab Mal
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bahut vadia lagia g parh k khoob likhia 

 

 

ਅੰਧਾ ਅੰਗ ਨਾਰ ਨੂੰ ਕਹਿੰਦੇ ਸਾਰੇ ਗਰੰਥ ਪਵਿੱਤਰ ਨੇ 
ਔਰਤ ਨੂੰ ਜੌ ਜੁੱਤੀ ਸਮਝਣ ਉਹ ਵੀ ਇਕ ਛਿੱਤਰ ਨੇ 

ਅੰਧਾ ਅੰਗ ਨਾਰ ਨੂੰ ਕਹਿੰਦੇ ਸਾਰੇ ਗਰੰਥ ਪਵਿੱਤਰ ਨੇ 

ਔਰਤ ਨੂੰ ਜੌ ਜੁੱਤੀ ਸਮਝਣ ਉਹ ਵੀ ਇਕ ਛਿੱਤਰ ਨੇ 

 

03 Feb 2010

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