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Seema nazam
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saavi saavi ravi

SSa Sab Members nu ...Ek Post Jo mai purani cmnty tey v paye c..aaj dobara paa rahin kiyun k jo hun es cmnty tey judey hn members oh v pad lain........tey jihna pehlan v padi hai oh yaad taza kar lain...

saavi saavi Ravi

Raavi wagdi hai
Mery tapdey parin heth
usdi savi savi(Soft) Raite hai
Ek Mitha jiha ehsaas hai
Jad di tu meri dehleez tey ayee
Tn mai maa(Mother) Jihey Paviitar Rishtey naal
Jud key tery ehsaas da nigh maniya
Jad tu Bolna sikhiya tn mery kanna(Ears) nu
Kaynnat di mithaas ghul gye
Tu Turna sikhiya tn mei dharti di karjaaye ho gaye
nikey nikey kadama naal dharti nu mapan lagi
tn teri hond jarey 2 vich rach gaye
das warey(10Yr) beetey nikey 2 ful gundiyan
pata hi nahi lagiya k
anat rishtiayn di nadi paar kar jad mery taq pahunchi
Tn baap dey mathey tey ghoori c
roz diyan Tadna,nasihatan(Advise) tery bholepan chat kar gaiiyan
teriyan kitaban dey safiyan dey diggey moti
mai apni under sambh laye.
baap di pagdi,veer di rkahdi
sab ney milkey tainu doli paa ditta
Raavi auj v wagdi hai mai auj v turdi hn
par parian hethla sake mainu tapunda hai
akhan dey koye bhijdey hn
par man shaant hai key......
.................................
Dhiyan Dhan Pariya hn
11 Jul 2009

ਅਮਨਦੀਪ ਗਿੱਲ
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beautiful composition mam g........very touching indeed te eh ik maa hii likh sakdi....thanx a ton for sharing here
11 Jul 2009

Satwinder  Satti
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Very heart touching
jeonde wasde raho
11 Jul 2009

davu kaur
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sat sri akal seema ji....aman ne bilkul sahi keha hai.... i felt so emotional ke mere mom vi evi hi sochde honge....to be daughter is most precious thing but jad eh paraeyan dhan hon di gal ho jaandi hai jee chhota jeha ho jaanda hai....thank you
12 Jul 2009

Amrinder Singh
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bahut wadhiya ji..
dobara parh k vee naviN hee laggi....

bahut khoob.. heart touching..
12 Jul 2009

Seema nazam
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sab dhanwad g
tusi es rachna nu fir ton srahiya

19 Jul 2009

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