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Manbir Natt
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cheteo rakheo yaaran nu
ssa ji ajj pehli waar haazri lawa reha. ki kariye zindagi de rujheve hi ehje ne. likheya vi boht time baad hai , pata nahi lagga kitho kithe pohnch geya . par umeed karda raah to bhatke hoye ne sidhe raaste paoge.


asi mitti de putle ha , ki jaaniye khaaran nu
jad chadd sansaar gaye chete rakhi yaara nu

jiste pehla bol maa maa si , uste maa di sobhdi na
har kise di maa hundi , par eh duniya sochdi na
kise ne puttar ni kehna, tarsoge maa de pyaara nu
jad chadd sansaar gaye chete rakhi yaara nu

wand ghar di fer dil di hun rabb vi wand chaddeya
saunh jisdi khaane oo , ohda dil cho darr kadheya
ik sache nu chaddke poojeya jhoothe hazaaran nu
jad chadd sansaar gaye chete rakhi yaara nu

kayia nu poore milde ne , te kayi poore paonde na (referring to clothes)
kayi rukhi missi de aadi, kayi jaan ke khaande na
sab rang ne malik de , bhandiye kismat diya maara nu
jad chadd sansaar gaye chete rakhi yaara nu

rang ikko khoon da hai , par rang chamdi de vikde ne
dil diyan kaun puche , paiseya naal dil milde ne
paisa ki modha dau , arthi de dande chaaran nu
jad chadd sansaar gaye chete rakhi yaara nu

dheeyan te nasheya to bina mushkilan hor vi ne punjab nu
rukh chadde ni ,te wand kiti , annpadhta mukaaya aab nu
hath nu takkdi te takkdi nu hath to bina dikhe na sarkaran nu
jad chadd sansaar gaye chete rakhi yaara nu

jhoothi ashiqui nu chaddke , kade ranjhe vi ban jayeo
saal majhiyan chaar leo, kise kamm de ban jayeo
daaru chaddke pee leo ve tusi dudh diya dhaaran nu
jad chadd sansaar gaye chete rakhi yaara nu

ManViR jaanda tu vi sab kujh hai , is vich koi shaqq nahi
cheez tu vi ohi chahouna jiste tera haqq nahi
har saah naal udeek reha chandreya maut diya taaran nu
jado chadd sansaar gaye chete rakheo yaaran nu
waqt diya taihan vich kho jana , puchonge kisse-kaaran nu
jad chadd sansaar gaye chete rakheo yaara nu
13 Jul 2009

Satwinder  Satti
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Bahut umda veer
very good nice to read
jeonda wasda reh
14 Jul 2009

Karam Garcha Khottey Sikkey
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nice one :)
14 Jul 2009

Amrinder Singh
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Bahut veer... too good..

Gurmukhi ch hundi tan parhan da hor maza auna si.. :)
14 Jul 2009

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