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Amanjot Gill
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Saal da pahla din

Navan saal si chadeya, poh di nimi nimi tup si,

Gurdiware de speakaraan toh aaunde kirtan de lafaz hauli hauli hawa vich beh rahe si.

Darda, kumlaunda eh dil, gaya puchchan maapeyaan toh ke,
aaj aauna sartaj ne chandigarh, je haami bharo taan darshan kar aayiye.


Javab aaya na da, te jigra ja beh gaya,
Sartaj tera aauna pakka si, per saada aana reh gaya,
Umeed vich bhareya ghade da paani, kitte chhal maar ke viche hi reh gaya.

Per baba Nanak karni wala, jehra baah hamesha pharda hain,
na edhar di, na udhar di, seedha raah hamesha kad da hain.

Behan meri ne kitta kedda chitt, te chad gayi suh bagawat di,
pahla din si saal da, te hun add gi gal saadi vi.
je aaj dab gaye taan saara saal dab de ravange,
ek vaar darshan ho jaan, bas pher saara saal darshan karde ravange.


Gaalan paiyaan per oh jaapiyaan missi roti naal shakkar vich gheyo,
ek paase suneya te kittiyaan parre dujje paseyo.
bag chakke, vich do jodi kapade,
phadi bus jehri seedha chandigarh apade.


Hausle buland si ke aaj taan darshan karange hi karange,
binna pass toh aagon nahi taan peechon vadange hi vadange.
Pahuche chandigarh, te behan ne milaye chaar phone,
do mame nu te do kitte hor,

jaddo jehad vich pahuch gaye tagore.


Line lokkan di lambi si, te pass di kammi si,
chamak de suraj te lageya gerahn, jado pata lageya ke har pass di entry te karde ne sign.
Ek bhala manas khabare kithon aaya, de ke saanu pass oh beedh vich samaya.


Andhar baith, mann mauji ho khideya,
dekh Sartaj nu, saada jigra ja thireya,

Har gaane te maari seeti, har lafaz de naal mann tureya.

 

Har tasveer nu ankhaan vich kaid kitta, har bol nu mann vich.
Ek khaab si jo pura hoyeya, ek chah si jo sampan hoyi.

13 Feb 2010

Satwinder  Satti
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Wah amanjot ji bahut wadhiya.. Bahut khoobsurti nal byan kita.. Sachi maza aa gaya parh ke.

13 Feb 2010

hardeep kaur dhindsa
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sat shri akal amanjot ji

 

wah ji wah

boh wadhia likhea hai

 

thanx.

13 Feb 2010

Jass Panaichan
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เจฌเจนเฉเจค เจนเฉ€ เจตเจงเฉ€เจ† เจตเฉ€เจฐ .........เจ•เจฎเจพเจฒ เจ•เจฐเจคเจพ เจ† เจคเฉ‡ .......เจธเจตเจพเจฆ เจนเฉ€ เจ† เจ—เจฟเจ† .....เจœเฉ€เจ“

13 Feb 2010

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ehnu kehnde ne aap-biti perfectly put in words......


sachi nahi bhulna oh din......gr8 share dear......oye one thng tht u missed k os raat thand kinni c......te apne varge bagair pass de v bahar wait krn nu v tayar c ge...lolzzzz....ke der swer koi na koi jugad ta ban hee jau..........

13 Feb 2010

Amanjot Gill
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haan bhene, saal da pahla oh din kade nahi bhulega...

khaas karke oh jo tu mainu 3 baje tak jaga ke rakheya :P

 

Thanks for all your support

14 Feb 2010

Amrinder Singh
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hahaah.. Awesome...... kya baat ae... saara din lafza ch piro taa...... good one......

i missed that show.. :(

14 Feb 2010

Amanjot Gill
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Thanks Satwinder ji, Hardeep ji, Jass ji, Amrinder ji and Bhene for taking out the time and reading it...

Thanks a lot.

14 Feb 2010

Ranjan  Arora
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Kya baat hai Amanjot ji............Gaah paa rakehya tuci taa......Jiss bande piche enni jado jehad kitti...........unha tak eh kavita pahunchi k nhi??

15 Feb 2010

Amanjot Gill
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Thanks Ranjan bai ji...

Jinna vaste jado jehad kitti si, oh taan bahut vadi sakshiyat hann... eh kavita unna aage kuch v nahi

15 Feb 2010

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