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ROBIN PANNU
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ek tara meri zindagi da.....

har ek ensaan di zindagi vich koi na koi shaksh bahut khass hunda hai te mein ethe usnu ek ''tare'' da naam dita hai ....so g eh tara bhave jis tara da marzi hove, par apni zindagi vich esnu kade fikka na pen dena...so g meri zindagi de us tare bare mein kuch do ka lines sanjhiyan karna chahuda....umeed hai pasand karoge.....

 

     door ambra te chamkade hoye ek tare te nazar tikayi e,

     sada koi kasoor nai us tare ne khich sanu payi e, 

     tare ta hor bethere ne par es tare ne vakhri chamak vikhayi e,

     us allah di sari barqat lagda es tare vich samayi e,

     door ambra te............................. ..

     hun es tare agge ta sanu chann v fikka lagda e,

     es tare nu paun di chahat da deeva mere mann andar jagda e,

     eh deeva bujhna ta na-munkin hai,par us tare de tutan di aas hai,

     oh tara mere lai ek amrit hai,aj jisdi meinu pyaas hai,

     rabb sunega kade meri v es gal da meinu vishvash hai,

     tare ta lakha chamkade ne par rabba oh tara mere lai bahut khass e,

     sari-2 raat oh tara hun meinu us ambar de supne vikhaunda e,

     kade oh tara meri chholi hovega,bas ''PANNU''ese aas te jionda e,

 

   rabb sabna di zindagi de os tare nu sada salamat rakhe......

lao g hun tusi v apni zindagi de us tare bare kuch sade nal sanjha karna chahunde ho ta sade sareyan valo '' ji aayan nu'' so umeed hai g eh tara jaroor chamkega............

21 Feb 2010

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Bahut wadhiya likheya veere. Nazara aa gaya parh ke......

21 Feb 2010

Satwinder  Satti
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Oh taara meri zindgi da mainu jaan to pyara hai, o har pal timtimaunda rahe mere jeon da sahara hai..

21 Feb 2010

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bahut khoob barkhurdaar...........

21 Feb 2010

Amrinder Singh
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bahut wadhiya 22 g...!!

nice work

21 Feb 2010

ROBIN PANNU
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es nimane di tariff lai shukriya janab ....

21 Feb 2010

Jass Panaichan
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bahut khoob jnab .........bahut hi sohna likhia tusi............. jio veer jio

21 Feb 2010

ROBIN PANNU
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miharbani janab..

21 Feb 2010

ਅਮਨਦੀਪ ਗਿੱਲ
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nice effort......keep sharing

21 Feb 2010

hardeep kaur dhindsa
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sat shri akal ji

 

bahut sohni kalam chalaie hai, waheguru tuhade os tarey d chamak and slamti rakhey and jaldi oh tara tuhadi jholi vich aa pavey.

aameen

 

share karde rehna

thanx

21 Feb 2010

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