waah bai waah jassi aah ta kmaal karti tusi........... i like ur way to represent urself i.e..."aah main pta nhi ki likh dita" ........"main ta jhall jiha hi khlaar ta "........n many more"..........par tusi jo vi likhia bkmaal da likhia ........je main tareeef ch likhn baith javan ta shayed mera likhna kde vi na rukke ...............bas eddan hi likhde raho te sannu padn da maan bakhsade raho ..........rabb tuhadi kalam nu hor ball bakshe
us din raiku di collection pari c jawab den laga ta lite chali gayi pehle ta us collection layi shukriya te shukriya mainu is sahili to jaanu karwaun layi... te tuhadi ik ik line yani k ik ik so called jhallapan boht boht kamal hai
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sohne parinde di azaad udari
photo khich k sab kaid karan di koshish vichari
eh mere wallo jhal but tu oh azad panchi hai jinu malak har roz nave te pehla nalo wadde par de reha hai rabb aida hi tainu khush rakhe te tu sanu guide kardi rahe tuhadi ik ik line boht boht kamal hai thanks for sharing and writing