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Mandeep Kaur
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Kami

Kami

 

Kami tere ch ik ni,
Mere ch hazar e,
Kasoor tera ni meri kismat da,
Jisnu milke vi ni milda pyar e,

Pani di ik ik boond nu tarasdi main
Unj sagar mera yaar e
Kami tere ch ik ni
Mere ch hazar e,

Deep ban sansar ch kara roshni
Mere apne ghar andhkar e
Kami tere ch ik ni
Mere ch hazar e,

Kisan di oh banjar dharti main
Jisnu kisi kumbal futan da intezar e
Kami tere ch ik ni
Mere ch hazar e,

Main us patjhad da paudha,
Jisde naal rusi hoyi bhaar e
Kami tere ch ik ni
Mere ch hazar e,

Jad Rabb naal gila kita is gall da
Oh hass ke boleya
Eh sab is karke, kyonki tu meri khaas e


Jado vi tere to pucheya,
teri bhari hoyi akh hamesha kehndi menu
Ki teri har kami door kar sakda
mera pyaar e.....
Kami tere ch koi ni, bus dil ch bhareya pyaar e

Kami tere ch koi ni, bus dil ch bhareya pyaar e

 

Mandeep

01 Mar 2010

Jass Panaichan
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wah mandeep ji .........bahut hi vadhia likhia tusi ........thanx for sharing

01 Mar 2010

Mandeep Kaur
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Thanks

Thanks Jass ji...

01 Mar 2010

Lakhwinder Singh
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Pani di ik ik boond nu tarasdi main
Unj sagar mera yaar e
Kami tere ch ik ni
Mere ch hazar e....

 

 

bahut hi changi soch ae mandeep ji aap di...Good Job

mera sajda is dudh chitti soch nu...

jyonde vassde raho..te share krdo raho eho jeha...

01 Mar 2010

Mandeep Kaur
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Thanks

Thanks lakhwinder ji...poem appreciate karn layi

01 Mar 2010

Satwinder  Satti
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Bahut khoob. Kya baatan ne bade dina baad hazri lawayi hai. Jeooo

01 Mar 2010

Amrinder Singh
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bahut wadhiya mandeep ji...

nice to see you back here again... :)

01 Mar 2010

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bahut vadhiya mandeep g ... welcome back :)

02 Mar 2010

Mandeep Kaur
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Thanks

Thanks Amrinder ji n Satwinder ji...bohat dina baad likhi koi poem...punjabi ch type karna zara aukha lagda...is karke sirf english ch hi post kiti hai...

02 Mar 2010

Mandeep Kaur
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Thanks

Thanks firozpuria ji....halaki menu lagde main isto better likh sakdi si...next time may be

02 Mar 2010

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