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Ranpreet sekhon s
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ajj kal da dharm

kine ghar ujarhe ne,kine insaan marvae ne.

kade kise shehar kade kise shehar kine fasaad krae ne.

ik saanjh di awaj uthaun wale

khore kine ku main sooli chrae ne.

fir vi insaan da main sab ton vada karm haan..

main ajj kal da dharm haan main ajj kal da dharm haan............

mere granthan ch jo likhiya oh taan kade kise ne samjea te parhea nai.

ik duje wal talwaran taan kad layian par piyar wali gal te amal  kise karea nai.

hindu muslim sikh isai keh ke jo ik duje nu vadh dhe ne.

ohna which main rehnda ban ke khoon garm haan..

main ajj kal da dharm haan .........................................

ajj kal rehnda haan main ehna dhongi babean dhe deran ch

ya fir rehnda haan ehna anparh bibiyan dhe geran ch.

duniya nu ki chanan vikhauna si

main khud warh ke beh gea haneran ch.

votan lyi jo "sekhon" menu vartde ne

ohna netavan naal ral ke main vi ho gea besharm haan.

main ajj kal da dharm haan................................

 

 

03 Mar 2010

ROBIN PANNU
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sire aa bai ...

krari chot mari aa sach di ....

เจœเจจเจฎ-เจœเจจเจฎ เจคเฉ‹ เจงเจฐเฉเจฎเจพ เจฆเฉ‡ เจจเจพ เจคเฉ‡ เจจเจพเจฐเฉ‡ เจฒเจ—เจฆเฉ‡ เจ†เจ เจจเฉ‡,

เจงเจฐเฉเจฎเจพ เจฆเฉ‡ เจจเจพ เจคเฉ‡ เจ‡เจน เจฒเฉ‹เจ• เจœเฉเจ—เจพ-เฉจ เจคเฉ‹ เจฅเจ—เจฆเฉ‡ เจ†เจ เจจเฉ‡,.......

03 Mar 2010

Jass Panaichan
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bai ji bahut kaim likhia ..........nice  job

03 Mar 2010

hardeep kaur dhindsa
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ohna which main rehnda ban ke khoon garm haan..

 

really awesomeeee

 

mainu lagda eh line sari kavita da kendri bhaav(theme)

hai. asi lok asal dharam nu tan samajdey he nahi, bus inna pata hunda hai k dharam naam de label nu koi kite galat chape nae sakda.

bahut he doongi gal kiti gayi hai.

 

thanx.

03 Mar 2010

Amrinder Singh
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bahut wadhiya 22 g...!!

keep sharing..!!

03 Mar 2010

Satwinder  Satti
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Hmmmmm. Jeo babeo kaim likheya.

04 Mar 2010

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