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Rajan Khalra
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Kuj koshish meri vi....

Sat Shri AKaal Ji sab nu,,,,,,dosto main v Punjabi Poetry likhan da shaunk rakhda wa.....te hun main ais topic ch tussi saareya de saamne apni poetries rakhanga....please tuc daseyo...tuhanu kidda di laggi....

 

 

Main tere to door hoja,,,ainu na apni majboori samjhi....
Khush rahi tu sohniye hamesha....sada dil de wich mainu luka ke rakhi....
Pyaar nahi hunda 2 pal da....ae ta poori zindagi saath nibhauna hunda...
Rabb na karein kal main duniya to chala ja...tu mainu apne dil cho athrua de na naal kadhdi..
Rabb karein appa agle janam ch fer milange....ik duje nu aiwe hi pyaar karange...
Ki hoya main tainu bacha ni sakeya.....kise hor de hatho tainu chura ni sakeya...
Rakhi parosa Rajan te appa agli waari fer milange......
..................appa agli waari fer milange.........

05 Mar 2010

Satwinder  Satti
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Nice one rajan. Khoobsurat khyal ne.. Keep posting..

05 Mar 2010

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good one rajan.. keep writing n sharing..

05 Mar 2010

Mandeep Kaur
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pyaari koshish rajan ni....keep it up...

05 Mar 2010

Jass Panaichan
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o shabaash bai mundia .......... bahut vadhia .............. .

 

 

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05 Mar 2010

Rajan Khalra
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Khush rehanda ni main apne dukh chhupaun lai,
jado awe kuch zyada hi yaad teri kone ch jaake rolaida,
ni mainu pata kise ne auna ni mainu chhup karaun lai,
fer aape hi kalle-kalle has laiyda,
ambara ch jiwe badal barasde ne,
barasdiye ne meri akhiya vi,
Ishq ch lagge na chot kade kise nu,
pucho mere to ki hunda dukh judaai da,
meri zindagi vi kardi aa swagat har kise nu,
pucho mere to pyaar kiwe kisdi yaad ch nibhai da...
From Rajan Khalra

 

 

05 Mar 2010

Jassi Sangha
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rajan ah new poem alagg topic bna k post krni c .. ethe dobara shayd kise de dhyyaan ch na awe..

05 Mar 2010

Satwinder  Satti
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Wah awesome badi feel hundi hai eh poem.. Ruwa ta greeb nu.

05 Mar 2010

Rajan Khalra
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Thanks to you all ji....

05 Mar 2010

Amrinder Singh
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great going bai...keep sharing..!!

05 Mar 2010

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