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Satvir Kaur jhali
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Ammi Babley Da Vehrra
Wasda rahey ammi babley da vehrra
Khushiya sougata naal bhareya hai jehrra

Aounda rahu yaad jehra bachpan bitaya
ek-ek kona main haseya naal mehkaya
khed di c kud di c poundi c main kikli
ajj aya jd yaad vehrra ek bhubh meri nikli
bas yada hi reh gyiaa mul pauga hun kehrra
Wasda rahey ammi babley da vehrra
Khushiya sougata naal bhareya hai jehrra


Ammi meri akha mera kdi na morrdi
tadkey uth tiyar kr mainu school nu c tordi
krdi udeek c jado schoolo c main aoundi
churiaan c kutt kutt mainu oh khwaoundi
bhulna na kdi laad ldaya mainu jehrra
Wasda rahey ammi babley da vehrra
Khushiya sougata naal bhareya hai jehrra


Baap mere jeha dil hona na kisi da
nikey-nikey chaw mere oh hathaan uttey chukda
muho c jo kad di oh tali meri dharda
meriaan totliya gallaan sun ohda jee ni c bharda
ajj akho ohley ho gya ohdi "Ladali" da chera
Wasda rahey ammi babley da vehrra
Khushiya sougata naal bhareya hai jehrra


Veer mere eon jiwein khirrey hoy gulaab
motiyaan cho sohney moti heeriann cho lal
japdey ney eon jivein hansa dey ney jorrey
hasdey wasdey rehan veer mere sohney
sajeya rahey sir ehna de khushiya sehra
Wasda rahey ammi babley da vehrra
Khushiya sougata naal bhareya hai jehrra


Eko ek bhein meri sakhi meri shelarri
do zind ek jaan asa hun reh gyi oh ikalarri
vidayi likhi dhiyaan di os dhadey rabb dey ney choz
ek din udh jandiya eh chirriyaan chug k chog
Shukar os rabb da maan dita mainu jehra
Wasda rahey ammi babley da vehrra
Khushiya sougata naal bhareya hai jehrra


24 Jul 2009

Balihar Sandhu BS
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Bade Vadhia Tarike Naal Bian Keetey Ne...Dhee De Khiyal..

Very Nice...Keep Writing
24 Jul 2009

Karam Garcha Khottey Sikkey
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very good

mind blowing

chuk de fatte
24 Jul 2009

Satwinder  Satti
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Very good
ik dhee da apne mapeyan de ghar vich rehn nu bade khoobsoorat lafza ch byan kita hai,
jeooo.............
Loi........... Babul tere mehla cho teri laado pardesan hoi.
24 Jul 2009

Amrinder Singh
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bahut wadhiya satvir..

aidan hee lagge raho..!!
keep writin n keep posting...

24 Jul 2009

Kulwant Singh
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1st stanza excellent
bahut wadia dhang naal ik ik g nu kavita vich paro k paish kita aap g ne...........
so agge v likh de raho...........
26 Jul 2009

gagandeep singh
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nice plz keep it up

 

29 Oct 2009

ਅਮਨਦੀਪ ਗਿੱਲ
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beautiful composition!!!!!!!!!

thanx for sharing here.......bless u

01 Nov 2009

sandeep singh
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bahut vadiyaa ji....

10 Nov 2009

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