Ik usdiya yaadan ne mainu puri raat son na ditta,,,,, 
ik usde vaade ne mainu ron v na ditta, 

Vekhda rehanda c main ambara de taare, 
te sochda hunda c hun main jiyo kisde sahare,, 

sochda c shayad osnu v meri yaad aundi howegi, 
adhi adhi raat nu usde kamre di batti v jaldi bujhdi howegi,, 

je tu mainu jaan bujhke chhad na chaundi c, 
shayad tu apne khwab pure karna chaundi c, 

ja ni kamliye karla apne khwab pure,,,, 
Rajan de sapne change ne adhure.... 

nice effort.....keep sharing

Nice one 22. Likhda reh share karda reh. Jeooo

khoob likhaya jnab....kaim aa bai ...

thnx 4 sharing ad keep it up...

rabb kalam nu hor toufeeq bakhshe,..