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Seema nazam
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Bell ਵੱਜੀ ਤਾਂ ਦੇਖਿਆ ਰਾਣੋ ਸਫਾਈ ਕਰਨ ਲਈ ਆ ਗਈ ਸੀ ... ਮੈਂ ਕਿਹਾ ਵੀ ਸੀ ਕੇ ਦੇਰ ਨਾਲ ਆਵੀਂ ਪਰ ਓਹ ਫੇਰ ਜਲਦੀ ਆ ਗਈ.. ਹਾਂ ਰਾਣੋ ਕੀ ਹਾਲ ਐ ਤੇਰੇ ਘਰ ਵਾਲੇ ਦਾ ? ਹੁਣ ਤਾਂ ਨਹੀ ਮਾਰਦਾ ਤੈਨੂੰ ? ਕੀ ਗੱਲ ਕਰਦੇ ਹੋ ਬੀਬੀ ਜੀ.. ਉਸਨੇ ਕਿਹੜਾ ਹਟ ਜਾਣਾ ਹੈ... ਤੁਸੀਂ ਤਾਂ ਵਧੀਆ ਕੀਤਾ ਸੀ.. ਆਪਣੀ ਸਿਫ਼ਾਰਿਸ਼ ਨਾਲ ਉਸਨੂੰ ਫੜਾਇਆ ਪਰ ਮੈਥੋਂ ਜਰਿਆ ਨਹੀਂ ਗਿਆ ਜਦ ਪੁਲਿਸ ਨੇ ਉਸਨੂੰ ਕੁੱਟਿਆ.. ਭਾਂਵੇ ਕੇ ਓਹ ਰੋਜ਼ ਮੈਨੂੰ ਕੁੱਟਦਾ ਹੈ ਪਰ ਕੀ ਕਰਾਂ.. ਔਰਤ ਹਾਂ ਨਾ...

ਫਟਾਫਟ ਸਫਾਈ ਕਰਨ ਪੌੜੀਆਂ ਚੜ ਗਈ ਤੇ ਮੈਂ ਉਸਦਾ ਮੂੰਹ ਦੇਖਦੀ ਰਹਿ ਗਈ .. ਤੇ ਮੇਰੀ ਆਪਸੀ ਰਿਸ਼ਤਿਆਂ ਦੀ ਰੰਜਿਸ਼ ਉਸਦੇ ਜਵਾਬ ਸਾਹਮਣੇ ਬੌਣੀ ਹੋ ਗਈ

 

07 Mar 2010

Gursaab Mal
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well written seema g ,,,,but i think this mentality shud b changed ,if someone is not satisfied wid his/her life partner it shud b brought to an end 

07 Mar 2010

Sony Punjabi
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tuhadi kahani vadhiya ai te aurat de subaah da emotinal pakh dikhaundi ai,,,Par main personally eh sochda ke kayi vaar saade emotions ee saade layi saraap sidh hunde ne,,,

 

07 Mar 2010

ਅਮਨਦੀਪ ਗਿੱਲ
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well written seema g...... quite thoughtful.....thanx for sharing

07 Mar 2010

narinder singh
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aurat,,,seema ji,,ehsaas khub ne..

Feminism chahe almost poore world ch hai,,but still kujh countries like india wich aur nu ajj v majbooria de hath was pe bahut kujh jarna painda hai,,..

aap ne khub likheya hai

keep sharing

07 Mar 2010

Amrinder Singh
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bahut khoob seema ji...!!

07 Mar 2010

Jassi Sangha
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kahani achhi aa ji..but yeah mentality shud b changed.. kudiyan nu agge auna ee pyega...galat halaatan ton bgawat krna bewfaai ya izzat di parwah na krna nhi hunda hmesha... awaaz uthani pyegi kde tan..te sahi tym te uthegi fayda tan he aa..

07 Mar 2010

Satwinder  Satti
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Bahut wadhiya seema ji.

07 Mar 2010

Heera kianpuria
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bahut vadiya Seema ji , but India vich ehna gallan ton ta Aurat piche hai

07 Mar 2010

Seema nazam
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SSA

Sab dostan da rachna nu pasand karan tey comments laye shukriya.... bahut bahut shukriya.....

 

AAj (8 march )Womens day hai, Kiniyan Aurtan jandiyan hn....sada azad desh aaj v aurat nu apni pakad ton azad nahi karna chaunda aaj v jiyda ginti rano wargiyan aurtan di hai kadi aas paas nazar mariye tn ajehy kirdaar sadey bahut nazdeek hi mil jandey hn.....

08 Mar 2010

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