jihnu bhulan di aje tak kosish jaari ae

jihde piche main apni sari zindgi haari ae

yaad kar apne attet nu wang mere oh vi dardi hovegi

ajj vi marjani oh menu chete kardi hovegi...

ajj vi chehra mera jad ohde khawaban ch aundha hona ae

yaad kar mere wangu dil ohda vi rondha hona ae

wang mere jad apne hi parchaven oh phardi hovegi

ajj vi marjani............................................

hun vi jad ohna puraniyan thavan te oh jandi honi ae

kite apne faisle te jarur pachtaundi honi ae

mere wangu badal chuke waqt naal jad oh vi larhdi hovegi

ajj vi marjani...........................

ajj vi asmaan ch jad tara koi tutda hona ae

hun vi apna ban jad koi kise apne nu lutda hona ae

wang "sekhon" dhe oh vi jad ishq di agg which sarhdi hovegi.

ajj vi marjani oh "sekhon" nu chete kardi hovegi..................

Bahut sohna likheya veere.

Bahut Vadiya 22g , I Think this is the better way to express ur feelings.

Hmmmm...khiyalan nu kavita de roop ch bakhubi bian keeta ae....VADHIA

Mainu bahuta nahi pata k kavita kiven likhde ne...par lagda ae thorhi jahi hor mehnat naal jyada vadhia ho sakdi c( eh wali line ton mehsoos ho riha ae "mere wangu badal chuke waqt naal jad oh vi larhdi hovegi") jyada serious naa laina kyonk shayad mainu aiven hee es taran lagga hai....

anyway nice effort ....keep it up

dil de dard nu bari suhani tara byan kita hai

bahut sohna likheya veer...

great effort....