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Kulwant Singh
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das mera ki kasoor
Aaj mein baabla bina kasooroon mari ,
das mera ki kasoor.,
Mein ta koi farmaesh na rakhi,
Mein na kisse bura aakhi ,
das mera ki kasoor………..
mein ta bappu kehna chahya,
teri ungal fad turna chahya,
godd teri ch mein kehdna chahya,
das mera ki kasoor………
supanea vich tere aauna chahya,
naal gudian patooleyan kehdna chaya,
tere lai mein jina chahya,
das mera ki kasoor………
pratibha vaangu banana chahya
sunita vangu udana chahya.
Krishan di jogan bananna chahya
na Tera roshan karna chahya
das mera ki kasoor………
laxmi ban ghar auna chahya
veer nu rakhdi mein banana chahya,
do gharan nu milauna chahya
kukh de vichun tu aaj marvaya,
das mera ki kasoor………
das mera ki kasoor………
27 Jul 2009

Satwinder  Satti
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Good one
keep it up
27 Jul 2009

Karam Garcha Khottey Sikkey
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Mind blowing

great efforts

keep writting.......
28 Jul 2009

Amrinder Singh
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bahut wadhiya veere..
28 Jul 2009

yuvi 22 uv
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nice effort janab. keep it up
28 Jul 2009

Amrit Manghera
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Bht he jada sohna likhya a. Pad k bht wadiyn lagya a great..
28 Jul 2009

vinny kaushal
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very good sir..........keep going...
28 Jul 2009

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