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Satwinder  Satti
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JIS DIN BHULNA HOU BHUL JAYI...

" Je meri is juban nu tusi geet samjheya ta tu jaane,

koi sach chupauna aukha nahi,

par je meri neet samjheya ta tu jaane,

asi oh full de kande haan jo khushian nu chubhde rahe,

dard lako apne hase naal haami bharde rahe,

shadd dila hun ki nazayaj ae karni jo kar gaye so kar gaye,

Ajj tere layi chunauti likhi SATTI ne oh pyar nahi karde jo dar gaye"

 

 

Ik waar keh sau baar kar ke dikhawange,

tere ik kehne te zindgi nu bhull jawange,

par dosh koi na lawi badnaam jeha karke,

jis din bhulna hou bhul jayi,

PAR! arthi meri shamshaan ch dharke....

 

ajj tenu tere maape pyare, par mainu ros na koi,

tu jittdi rehe umra di baazi, rahe khushiyan ch khoi,

par khushi koi khatti na kise da nuksaan jeha karke,

jis din bhulna hou bhul jayi,

PAR! arthi meri shamshaan ch dharke....

 

ajj hath ki main jind tere wal karke baith gaya,

dhoof,batti,pooja di thaali tere agge dharke baith gaya,

tu sab kujh na thukra jayi aivein maan jeha karke,

jis din bhulna hou bhul jayi,

PAR! arthi meri shamshaan ch dharke....

 

eh mauka tenu de dita, saari umar bitaun da,

waar waar ni dil pighalda sachi chandre saawan da,

teriyan yaadan nu vihauna tera naam jeha karke,

jis din bhulna hou bhul jayi,

PAR! arthi meri shamshaan ch dharke....

 

mere kol sareer kalla, vich rooh teri wasdi,

mere jism di haddi te banke maas tu rach gayi,

tenu gal laa ke sab dasna, time kadi aaram jeha karke,

jis din bhulna hou bhul jayi,

PAR! arthi meri shamshaan ch dharke....

 

mera dil ae pathar nahi tenu lakh samjhayeya,

asliyat mom hundi hai, tu kyo na pighlaya,

kabar nu ronda vekh lawi SATTI naam jeha parhke,

jis din bhulna hou bhul jayi,

PAR! arthi meri shamshaan ch dharke....

 

 

30 Mar 2010

Amrinder Singh
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touching 22 g....

bahut wadhiya likheya...!!!

30 Mar 2010

hardeep kaur dhindsa
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awesome satti ji

 

hor add karan lae jaldi auana.

30 Mar 2010

harinder Janjua
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bahut hi vadiya  likhya satti ji

31 Mar 2010

Satwinder  Satti
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Thanks ami 22, hardeep ji and harindr ji.

04 Apr 2010

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bahut wadia aa ji.ehde title ne e jaan kadhan wala e.

injh e likhde te share karde raho ji.

05 Apr 2010

Satwinder  Satti
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Thanks alot amar.

05 Apr 2010

Lakhwinder Singh
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Good Job

 

wah sati veere...

kya baatan ne...

jiyo veer ji...

05 Apr 2010

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