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Karam Garcha Khottey Sikkey
Karam Garcha
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Tutti Hoyi Tasveer
Meri har tasveer mainu tutti disdi.
kadey kadey taqdeer meri futti disdi.
jehdi akh vich yaar da diddar hunda c,
aaj hanjuan ne othey v lakeer khichti.
meri har tasveer menu tutti disdi.

adhi raat da e vela hanju khatam na hundey.
dekh meri e udasi chan tare v ne rondey.
nerayan ch tanhai mere modey lagdi.
meri har tasveer menu tutti disdi.

kai vari sochan aaj eh kisssa hi muka devan.
pal pal maran nallo ek pal ch muka lavan.
bhedey waqt di lagam hathon chuti disdi.
meri har tasveer mainu tutti disdi.

kujh akhdey "Karam" kataon chup hogaya.
rooh udh gayi te mitti wala bout hogaya.
eh chadar v kabran di mitti disdi.
meri har tasveer mainu tutti disdi.
23 May 2009

gagandeep singh
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bohat vadiya likhya hai sir.
28 May 2009

Karam Garcha Khottey Sikkey
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karam
thnx!!!!!:)
08 Jun 2009

ravi chauhan
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ravi
22 ji vakye bot vadia al mainu v tuhadi tasveer tuti nazar a rahi a
08 Jun 2009

veer param singh
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tasveer
sat srio akal veer g
compliment late hun srry
very nice sir
this is smthing new like ur own life experince
keep it up sir
thanx!
10 Jun 2009

Amrinder Singh
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bahut wadhiya 22 g.. too good....
10 Jun 2009

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