tere pichon lagi yari chan tareyan de naal,

sachey yarra nal millon da hai dhanvad tera.

Ik pal v na suttey akhan ho gayian lal,

kai sala layi jagon da hai dhanvad tera.

butta Isqe da laya badi sadran de naal,

paatt jaron hi mukaan da hai dhanvad tera.

nalley gani challa mod ta tun mod ta rumaal,

photo chita mann jalon da hai dhanvaad tera.

dukhan wala har passe aya hai bhuchal,

bedi "KARAM" de dubon da hai dhanvaad tera.

sathon sulji na guthi gaman paya aisa jaal,

umran layi uljon da hai dhanvad tera.

kiss hal ch jeondey kadey aya na khayaal,

aan madiyan te roun da hai dhanvaad tera.

"butta ishqe da laya badi sadhra de naal

patt jarro hi mukaun da hai dhanwad tera"

bahut sohni rachna hai ji.............saria hi satra sohnia ne

too good, keep going !!!

bahut khoob veer ji..

aas hai punjabi shayari de prati aap ji da adab da eh chiraag umar bhar jagmgaunda rahe..

ameen !!

pahji tuhada wi dhanwaad share karan layi.... :P

bhot sohna likhiya....

dhanvad sareya da :)

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