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gurpreet

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ਫਾਸਲਾ

ਸਥਿਰ
ਅਡੋਲ
"ਸੋਚ"
ਚਿੰਤਨ ਚੌ
ਨਿਕਲ ਕੋਹਾਂ
ਦੂਰ ਲੈ
ਜਾਂਦੀ ਏ...

ਬੈਠੀ-ਬੈਠੀ
ਵਰਿਆਂ ਦੇ ਵਰੇ
ਹੰਢਾ ਆਉਂਦੀ ਆਂ
ਵਾਪਸ ਪਰਤ ਆਉਂਦੀ ਆਂ
ਆਪਣੇ ਪੈਰੀ ਬੇਗਾਨੇ ਦੇਸ...

- ਗੁਰਪਰੀਤ ਕੌਰ

09 Aug 2009

Satwinder

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Good one gurpreet ji
keep it up and keep sharing
jeooooo

09 Aug 2009

Amrinder

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wah ji...

kujh lines vich jazbaat khoobsurati naal pesh kar ditte ...
lajawab..

09 Aug 2009

Reet

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Sat Shri Aakaal

hmmmm bohaat kuch keh gyee thore shabda ch,,,

god bless u

13 Aug 2009

ਅਮਨਦੀਪ

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hmmmm proud of u

14 Aug 2009

gurpreet

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satwinder, Amrinder, Reet, Ami gill.......

Thank you so much..............

14 Aug 2009

Kahlon Gagandeep

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nice one gurpreet ji............

06 Sep 2009

sandeep

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bahut vadiyaa gurpeet g...

06 Sep 2009

ਗੋਲਡੀ ਡੰਗ! ,

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bahut e wadia!! nice thought a v ik soch da hisa si!! sayad hun yaad ban jave!!

06 Sep 2009