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Aman Bhangoo
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Je na hoya sathon karja taar shaheedan da...
Je na hoya sathon karja taar shaheedan da...
Oh khoon v pani ban jana hai yaar shaheedan da...

Ose khooh te aj v daag chamkade kinne ne...
Gin laina kade ja k oh upkaar shaheedan da...

Ik ik karke bhul gaye j har kurbani nu...
Inqalab da naara jana haar shaheedan da...

Bade julam oh seh gaye sanu hasda vekhan lai...
Ehsaan na hoya par sathon sawikar shaheedan da...

Lorh hai navi peerhi nu apna asal pachhanan di...
Itihaas paina duhrauna fer ik vaar shaheedan da...

Ik vaari je khur gai murhke jarh eh labhni nahin...
Jazbaat oh banu tamasha banke haar shaheedan da...

Aj lorh hai kaum nu beeda murh chukna paina...
Har supna nahin 'Bhangoo' jau bekaar shaheedan da...
28 May 2009

Amrinder Singh
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bahut wadhiya soch te jazbaat....
bahut wadhiya veer ji... aidan hee likhde raho.. shayad kaum diyan akhaan khul jaan..
28 May 2009

Aman Bhangoo
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Shukria Veer
Apan veer koshish karde rehna shayad kade koi positive result milje...nwys long way to go....
29 May 2009

Gurbax  Singh
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ਸੋਹਣਾ ਲਿਖਿਆ ਏ ਅਮਨ ਵੀਰ ਜੀ,
ਅੱਜ ਲੋੜ ਹੈ ਅਜਿਹਾ ਲਿਖਣ ਦੀ..
ਨਤੀਜੇ ਦੀ ਪਰਵਾਹ ਛੱਡੋ ਤੇ ਰੌਸ਼ਨੀ ਵੰਡਦੇ ਰਹੋ.....
ਐਦਾਂ ਹੀ ਲਿਖਦੇ ਰਹੋ ....
29 May 2009

Aman Bhangoo
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ਧੰਨਵਾਦ ਵੀਰ
ਕੋਸ਼ਿਸ਼ ਕਰਦੇ ਰਹਾਂਗੇ....
ਲਿਖਦੇ ਰਹਾਂਗੇ...
ਤੇ ਸਿਖਦੇ ਰਹਾਂਗੇ....
29 May 2009

Balihar Sandhu BS
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Keep it up 22G bahut vadhia hai!!!!!
ਬਹੁਤ ਹੀ ਵਧੀਆ ਉਪਰਾਲਾ ਹੈ ਤੁਹਾਡਾ ਸੁੱਤੀ ਕੌਮ ਨੂੰ ਜਗਾਉਣ ਲਈ
ਇੱਕ ਦਿਨ ਇਹ ਮਿਹਨਤ ਜਰੂਰ ਰੰਗ ਲਿਆਏਗੀ
02 Jun 2009

Aman Bhangoo
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Dhanvaad
Dhanvaaad Bai ji....
06 Jun 2009

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