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Karam Garcha Khottey Sikkey
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Daru de Gulam
Katon daru nu kharab loki akh de ne rehndey.
mein khush hovan p k oh dukhi ho ne behndey.
Laye sah c udharey, ehdey naam ho gaye.
Asin holi holi daru de gulam ho gaye.

akhan de gayian jawab kujh pal layi aaja.
badey chir da uneendaa sada layi tun suaaja.
sauna kabaran ch pake intzaam ho gaye.
Asin holi holi daru de gulam ho gaye.

turaya firda awara tere shahar aagaya.
mere pichey-2 taneya da zahar agaya.
ohana galiyan de vich badnaam ho gaye.
Asin holi holi daru de gulam ho gaye.

jadon shud gaye ne yar katon avey fir yaad.
ehna yaadan ne hi "Karam" Nu kita Barbaad.
ohna yaadan de v sir ilzaam ho gaye.
Asin holi holi daru de gulam ho gaye.

01 Jun 2009

kudrat singh
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Hello
Balle Balle Bahut Hi wadiya Hai. Hor V likh. Changa! Keep it up!
01 Jun 2009

gagandeep singh
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Gagan
nice thought dude
03 Jun 2009

Karam Garcha Khottey Sikkey
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karam
thank you!!!!
08 Jun 2009

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