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Karam Garcha Khottey Sikkey
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Rehn Vasde Sajan
Rehn Vasde jo sajna nu rol de sajan.
batan aaj v ne ohi pur na goul de sajan.
Rehn Vasde jo sajna nu rol de sajan.

jadon jindgi nu jeen da sabub ban gaye.
kada rub akh dita sachi rub ban gaye.
beh gaye rus k bolaya v na bol de sajan.
Rehn Vasde jo sajna nu rol de sajan.

jadon bagan de san mali rahe kandey chubdey.
aaj pani bina kabaran te phull ugdey.
tor tani nalon pairan ch madol de sajan.
Rehn Vasde jo sajna nu rol de sajan.

kami mere vich honi tahin shud gaye sajan.
khata meri v tan honi dilon kad gaye sajan.
aun supney k yadan ch tatol de sajan.
Rehn Vasde jo sajna nu rol de sajan.

gum milgaye ne khisi layi kita c main pyar.
khorey "KARAM" de lekhan vich kina intzaar.
rehn dukhan wali takdi ch tol de sajan.
Rehn Vasde jo sajna nu rol de sajan.
03 Jun 2009

kudrat singh
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Sat Shri Akal
Hey Vey Eh Ta Bahut Bahut Wadiya, Sohniye Hai. Hor Likho Ji, Changa ji, theek hai ji. Well Done Karam, Keep it up. I am very Happy. My Favourite Lines in this Poem are
"Kami mere vch honi tahin Chud gaye sajan"
"Khata meri v tan honi dilon kad gaye sajan"
"Aun supney k yadan ch tatol de sajan"
"Rehn Vasde jo sajna nu rol de sajan"
07 Jun 2009

Karam Garcha Khottey Sikkey
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karam
Thank you very much.....
08 Jun 2009

ravi chauhan
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ravi
sir tuhada intzar v kahtam ho jauga lekh ta badal jande ne
very good poetry keep it up
08 Jun 2009

veer param singh
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veer param
very gud sir g
keep it up
u r true man!
bravo !
08 Jun 2009

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