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Karam Garcha Khottey Sikkey
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Mainu dus de dila mereya ki karran ki na karran.
Dil de nedey reh k oh door he lagdi e.
Vishran to dil dar da akh v badli lagdi e.
Na ho j oh kise hor d aise gal ton main daran.
Mainu dus de dila mereya ki karran ki na karran.

Maan ki karna ohna te jo wadey tod dendey.
Pidth pichey jo gairan de nal natey jod lenday.
Kimat eh dil laun di jehdi hanjuan nal bharan.
Mainu dus de dila mereya ki karran ki na karran.

Mathey sub dey ek jahe pur mildiyan na takdeeran.
oh na mere hathan te main vekhiyan sub lakeeran.
Tenu kidey kolo kho lava te dus kidey nal laran.
Mainu dus dey dila mereya ki karan ki na karaan.
Kikran de tukeyan d dus kehda rakhi karda.
"Karam" nimana har sah dey nal kini vari marda.
Hathin apne zahar pya main sokhi maut maraan.
Mainu dus de dila mereya ki karran ki na karran.
31 Aug 2009

Kulwant Singh
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Mathey sub dey ek jahe pur mildiyan na takdeeran.
oh na mere hathan te main vekhiyan sub lakeeran.
Tenu kidey kolo kho lava te dus kidey nal laran.
Mainu dus dey dila mereya ki karan ki na karaan


bahut sohna hai...mere dil de kareeb
31 Aug 2009

Amrinder Singh
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bahut wadhiya 22 g...
too good..!!
31 Aug 2009

veer param singh
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dude very nice aaj kal ehi hal hai mera padh k nazara aa gya
keep rokin!
31 Aug 2009

Mandeep Kaur
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nice one g
nice one g...
01 Sep 2009

Satwinder  Satti
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Awesome brother bahut khoob veer bahut sohne shabad jode ne.
Kuch likhan di gustakhi kar reha.
Eh dunia dhokhebaaz sari yaara de bhes vich dushman baithe kihde naal larran....
Mainu das dila mereya main ki karran ki na karran
02 Sep 2009

preet mankoo
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Location: hum to chahne walon ke dil mein rehte hain....
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22 g tusin bahut vadiya kiha hai par dil de nere rehan waliyan layee eh v te kiha ja sakda hai..

Gal ik nal sadi ho gaye hai,
hun duja koi bulavena.
asin kise di akh wich dubh gaye haan,
koi kaddan sanu ave na.......
02 Sep 2009

Gurpreet (ਇbaਦਤ)
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bhut khoob likhya bai g....
02 Sep 2009

Amrit Manghera
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kamal a bai ji bht he sohna likhya a maja aya pad k
02 Sep 2009

Karam Garcha Khottey Sikkey
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thnx to all of u
02 Sep 2009

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