Sohn lagge bhavien jaan akhian eh bhar,
asi chup ho jayiye jee sabran nu kar,
kise kol nahio asi dukh kholde,
Hun hanjuan jagah nain khoon dolde....

Saade dil di khali payi hai kitab,
jis vich akhar darda de be-hisaab,
asi likh layiye dukh muho nahio bolde,
Hun hanjuan di jagah nain khoon dolde....

Meri kalam da dil mainu jaapda maasom,
jihnu aakhde siyahi hunda asli oh khoon,
par zalim loki na is gal nu gaulde,
Hun hanjuan di jagah nain khoon dolde....

Dharti vi paat gayi digh chuka aasmaan,
eh sab kismat dasda SATTI shareaam,
mera likheya hai sach sab mande makhaul ne,
Hun hanjuan di jagah nain khoon dolde ne..
HUN HANJUAN DI JAGAH NAIN KHOON DOLDE..........

Saade dil di khali payi hai kitab,
jis vich akhar darda de be-hisaab,
asi likh layiye dukh muho nahio bolde,
Hun hanjuan di jagah nain khoon dolde....

nice lines...full of emotions....thanks for sharing...keep it up

Thanks alot mandeep ji

bahut sohna likhia veer dil di dugai wicho likhia tusi te sach much hi dil nu cho gia............god bless u

Wahhhhh ....Dil de jazbaat bahut bekhubi bian keete ne...Sachmuch Bahut Vadhia !!!!!

Thnx for sharing ......

good one

Thanks gagan veer balihar veer and karam veer

Saade dil di khali payi hai kitab,
jis vich akhar darda de be-hisaab,
asi likh layiye dukh muho nahio bolde,
Hun hanjuan di jagah nain khoon dolde....

kya baatan ne satti 22
jeonda reh mitra

Nice ,, aachaa likhyaa haai
God Bless u

Thanks Gill veer and reet ji