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bhul ke v sajna da kdi dil nai todida
gallan karniyan badiyan sokhian,
Puganiyan koi koi janda...
La tah har koi lenda ,
Niboniyan koi koi janda...
Ghar apne hon sheshe de,
duje lai pathar nai chukida,
Rah jandi kudi wal kadi mada nai takida....
Yaari jethe layeiye jan var ke nibaidi,
jigri yaaran nal kdi dga nai kamaidi...
Je samaj na ave agla varka nai thulida,
kita hoya ehsaan kdi kisi da nai bhulida..
Yaari vich paisa kdi nai laida,
Dusman nu milan khali hath nai jayeda..
Rah jande nal bohti dosti nai payidi,
Yaari dosti ch kdi kudi nai leaidi..
Mapiyan da keha kdi nai modida,
Bhul k v sajna da kdi dil nai todida...
Bhul k v sajna da kdi dil nai todida...
08 Sep 2009

Mandeep Kaur
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nice one g
nice one g...keep it up

mera ik suggestion haiga...thoda space deya karo....ta jo reader chungi tara padd pave, ainwein essay jeha lagda e...sorry agar tuhanu meri gall buri lage

gallan karniyan badiyan sokhian,
Puganiyan koi koi janda...
La tah har koi lenda ,
Niboniyan koi koi janda...

Ghar apne hon sheshe de,
duje lai pathar nai chukida,
Rah jandi kudi wal kadi mada nai takida....

Yaari jethe layeiye jan var ke nibaidi,
jigri yaaran nal kdi dga nai kamaidi...
Je samaj na ave agla varka nai thulida,
kita hoya ehsaan kdi kisi da nai bhulida..

Yaari vich paisa kdi nai laida,
Dusman nu milan khali hath nai jayeda..
Rah jande nal bohti dosti nai payidi,
Yaari dosti ch kdi kudi nai leaidi..

Mapiyan da keha kdi nai modida,
Bhul k v sajna da kdi dil nai todida...
Bhul k v sajna da kdi dil nai todida.
08 Sep 2009

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