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Kahlon Gagandeep Singh
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"DIL"
Dil ne ik din dil nu pushia,
dila kihde naal dil mai lava.
Har dil dil da bhed na jane,
kis dil nu dildar banava.
Dil naal aj koi dil na lave,
kis dil nu dil wich vasava.
Koi dil matlab khatir launda,
koi dil launda man de chava.
Koi dil dil nu khidona samjhe,
koi samjhe lehra de charava.
Dil kahe dil te wishwas ki karie,
ki har dil kare dili wafava.
Dil naal dil koi je la vi lainda,
De jande dukh da sirnava.
Sache dil ni milde jag wich,
Ehi mai dil nu ehsas karava.
Dil da mamla dil hi jane,
'kahlon'ki samjhe dil dia simava.
Pata hai dil nal dil dhoka karde,
kyon dil de tukde karvava.
Dil ta hunda phulla wangar,
Sut jande wich tatia raha.
Dil nal dhoka kade na karie,
Na layie dil dia balava.

11 Sep 2009

Amrinder Singh
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bahut wadhiya gagandeep 22 g...
11 Sep 2009

Satwinder  Satti
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Bahut khoob veer
bahut khoobsurti nal byan kita hai i really appriciate u very good brother
jeooo
11 Sep 2009

Karam Garcha Khottey Sikkey
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vadiya soach da vadiya natija ;-)
11 Sep 2009

Kahlon Gagandeep Singh
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thanks amrinder veer,satti bai ji and garcha veer ji
thanks for encouragement..............
12 Sep 2009

aman deep
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hi

its so great .i like so much ur poetry.

29 Dec 2009

Jass Panaichan
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bahut hi khubsurat ...............bai ji jeoooooooooAgreed

30 Dec 2009

Kahlon Gagandeep Singh
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thanks

dear aman and jass bai ji

30 Dec 2009

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