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Mandeep Kaur
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Pyaar

Pyaar


Pyaar karna main vi sikh la gi ,
jekar tu sikha deve…..
Dil badle dil vi de da gi…..
Jekar tu vata leve…..

Kadi Kadi main russ la gi,
jekar tu mana leve…..
nazraan vich teri luk ja gi
jekar tu luka leve…..

Bullan to hassey kade tutne ni
Jekar tu hasa deve…..
Akhiyan cho athru rukne ni
Jekar tu rula deve…..

Utthan nu jee pher karna ni
Jekar tu sula deve…..
Neend ne akhian bharna ni
Jekar tu jaga deve…..


Hath hor kise da kade fadna ni
Jekar tu chhuda leve…..
Jagg saare ton fer darna ni
Jekar apni tu bana leve…..


Akheer ch bus aina hi kahagi….

tor nibayega je naal mere
te kive jatti piche hatt ju gi
aes tara teri meri zindagi
Ainwen pyaar-takraar ch katt ju gi
aes tara teri meri zindagi
Ainwen pyaar-takraar ch katt ju gi

19 Sep 2009

Amrinder Singh
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bahut wadhiya mandeep ji..
sohne ehsaas ne.. :)

20 Sep 2009

Balihar Sandhu BS
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Hmmmm Very Nice ..!!

Keep it up >>>>>
20 Sep 2009

Gurdeep Singh Baath
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behan tu meri kavita chura liti eh changa nai kita tu
20 Sep 2009

Mandeep Kaur
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Amrinder ji & Balihar ji...thank u...

@Gurdeep....tu mili raati..tainu main dussni aa....Kavita da K vi pata e...
20 Sep 2009

sandeep singh
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very nice g ...mandeep g..
22 Sep 2009

Mandeep Kaur
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thank u Sandeep ji...
22 Sep 2009

ㅤㅤㅤㅤ ㅤㅤㅤㅤㅤㅤㅤㅤㅤㅤㅤ ㅤㅤㅤㅤ ㅤㅤㅤㅤㅤㅤㅤ ㅤㅤㅤㅤ ㅤㅤㅤㅤㅤㅤㅤㅤㅤㅤㅤ ㅤㅤㅤㅤ ㅤㅤㅤㅤㅤㅤㅤㅤㅤㅤㅤ ㅤㅤㅤㅤ,
ㅤㅤㅤㅤ ㅤㅤㅤㅤㅤㅤㅤㅤㅤㅤㅤ ㅤㅤㅤㅤ ㅤㅤㅤㅤㅤㅤㅤ
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Damanpreet singh jhinjer
bahut wadia poetry very nice.......
23 Sep 2009

Mandeep Kaur
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Damanji...thanks for appreciating my poem
23 Sep 2009

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