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surjit singh
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Ronde ne

kujh thak gaye dhonde bhaar rishteyan da

te kujh saharean nu ronde ne

kujh tarasde ne do tuk roti nu

te kujh chubareyan nu ronde ne

kujh vadh jaande ne manzilan nu

paarh taqdeeran de varke

kujh har morh te baithke

lekhan haareyan nu ronde ne

har saver(morning)lae ke aundi

navi aas(umeed)"sodi" jehna layee

oh na hatth rakh matthe

tuttey taarean nu ronde ne 


12 Oct 2009
Amrinder Singh
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wah janab..

bahut khoobsurat kavita ae....

 

kujh vadh jaande ne manzilan nu

paarh taqdeeran de varke

kujh har morh te baithke

lekhan haareyan nu ronde ne

 

great..!! Good One
12 Oct 2009
vishal kapoor
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Wah janab , la jawab . vasde raho
13 Oct 2009
yuvi 22 uv
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gud one
13 Oct 2009
surjit singh
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thanx 22ji
15 Oct 2009
Balihar Sandhu BS
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Wah bai Wah Sodi bahut vadhia likhiya hai...

 

kujh vadh jaande ne manzilan nu

paarh taqdeeran de varke

kujh har morh te baithke

lekhan haareyan nu ronde ne
15 Oct 2009
Mandeep Kaur
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Surjit ji......bohat vadiya likhya hai tusi.....chhoti per asardar poem....very nice......
22 Oct 2009
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