phatt khol dikhavan dil de mein

ya umraan da pardaa rehanh deyan

dil saaf karaan sheeshe vargaa

ya yaadan da gardaa rehanh deyan

dil nu samjhaake murh jaavan

ik navi aas(umeed)di raahe mein

ya yaad cha hauke lainde nu

pal pal mein mardaa rehanh deyan

dil de jakhma di kar daaru

bhul jaan maaran sab waqt diyan

ya har phatt nu mein kurd kurd

umraan layee bhardaa rehanh deyan

Ik jitt di khushi deyan dil nu

ke bhul jaave haaran(defeat) "sodi"

ya har jitt naa tere laa ke

aakhir tak hardaa rehanh deyan

SSA Surjit ji.......bohat vadiya poem laggi mainu padan ch......thanks for sharing

bahut wadhiya 22 g..

Hmmmm.... Bahut vadhia ....lagge raho

dil de jakhma di kar daaru

bhul jaan maaran sab waqt diyan

ya har phatt nu mein kurd kurd

umraan layee bhardaa rehanh deyan

Thanks for sharing:-)

achi koshish , vadiya lagi.keep it up

thanks for ur time amrinder ji, mandeep ji,yuvi ji and balihar bhaji

Nice work