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Satwinder  Satti
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Hun maut vi mithi lagni hai(ek sachi kahani)

Sat shri akal dosto bahut dina baad hazri lawa riha haan. Ek sach jo ke mere dil bahut kareeb hai tuhade nal share karna chahanga. Mera ik bahut kareebi dost jo apni zindgi de aakhri saah lai reha c hosipital vich usnu cansor c and doctors ne keh dita c ke hun eh bach ni sakda te ajj es dunia vich vi nahi hai. Oh apni mehboob nu aakhri waar dekh ke mainu kavita layi bahut sohne word de gaya ohne kiha c "satti yaara hun maut vi mithi lagegi sohne sajjna nu dekh liya" ohdi sari kahani main es kavita vich das riha haan.......

 

 Ishq vi girvi,

 Mohabbat vi girvi,

 Sadi zindgi gamma vich ghir gayi,

 Maaf kari mitra eh jism vi vech challe,

 Hun maut vi mithi lagni hai mukh sajjna da vekh challe.

 

 Chure wale hathan nal oh sajda karn aaye,

 Jo reh gayiyan c viche oh sadhran bharan aaye,

 Wasdi rahi naa ohna de naal lai ke lekh challe,

 Hun maut vi mithi lagni hai mukh sajjna da vekh challe.

 

 Akhan de oh athru kive dil vich sambhalnge,

 Meriyan pairra kina chir galiyan vich bhalange,

Asi pairra wali sari hi naal lai ke ret challe,

 Hun maut vi mithi lagni hai mukh sajjna da vekh challe.

 

 Jina vishwash c chaunde,

 Ona oh nibha shaddeya,

 Fher galwakri bhare jism nu vekh naina nu waha shaddeya,

 Loka waang oh vi DEEP de siweyan di agg sek challe,

 Hun maut vi mithi lagni hai mukh sajjna da vekh challe.......

 

16 Nov 2009

sukhpreet singh
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22g,pad ke baut dukh hoya ke thoda dost iss dunia ch nahi riha,par usde de akhri bolan nu kavita de roop ch bhaut wadia tarike nal pesh karke tusi ona di akhri khoaish puri kiti hai.

16 Nov 2009

Amrinder Singh
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bahut afsos hoya eh sab jaan ke...

may his soul rest in peace..

 

 

great work done by u..!!

16 Nov 2009

Kanwal Dhillon
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jo tuhade dost de dil vich si usnu tusi bari sohani tara byan kita hai parmatama tuhade dost di atma nu santi bakse is janam na sahi per agle janam usnu usdi muhabat mil jaye.

16 Nov 2009

Jass Panaichan
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its so sad bai ji .............par insaan de hath kujh v ni ..........asi ta sirf apna farz ada kar sakde han ..........baki jo us Dadde nu manjoor..................

 

 

 

anyway...........nice to share with us.

17 Nov 2009

Mandeep Kaur
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Tere naal vada karke.....assi maut na nibha chale....tu samjhi na bewfa sanu.....band karke apni jabaan chale.....

 

Satwinder ji.....thanks for sharing......bohat hi afsos hoya....sachi athru aa ge......

21 Nov 2009

Jassi Sangha
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well done ji.. sad..

22 Nov 2009

Satwinder  Satti
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thanks alot all of u
28 Nov 2009

Jatinder Pal Singh
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kuch cheezan nu asi badal nahi sakde rabb mehar kare 

us pyaar bhari aatma nu shanti dewe

 

boht sohni rachna khas karke 

, Meriyan pairra kina chir galiyan vich bhalange, Asi pairra wali sari hi naal lai ke ret challe,

eh lines mainu boht pasand aayia

te rabb da shukriya k ohne us pyare di maut yaar de didaar karwa k khushnuma karti baki oh kirpa kare te usnu apne charna vich jagah dewe

 

29 Nov 2009

deep "chan jeha gabru"
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waah 22 ji great one. really heart touching

30 Dec 2009

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