main isse dal da punchi san kyon dallon kita vakh tusi.
main isse daal te jamyan san kyon dallon dita wad tusi.
main isse nu apna ghur maneya kyon ghur chun dita kad tusi.
kinj dasun apney bacheyan nu kiss jagah leya hai janam tusi.
mere uss ithas nu nota layi kyon jarda ton dita wad tusi.
main issey dal da panchi san kyon dalon kita vakh tusi.

jadon arri ohdey te chaldi c mere dil te lakh lakh var hoye .
kohardi nal ohnu inj chileya mere nal kharey kujh yar roye.

ohda ki kasoor ohnu kyon vadeya ohda guhnaa tan dinde dus tusi.
main isse daal da panchi san kyon dalon kita vakh tusi.

main choog chugan layi bachyan nu jad v chud k janda c.
meeh pain te mere bacheyan nu oh bukal vich lokanda c.
ohna bacheyan nu uss piyo kolon hai kato kita audd tusi.
main issey dal da panchi san kyon dalon kita vakh tusi.


"Kadon tak rukhan nu vadon gay."
"sanu ghuran de vichon kadon gay."
"oh din v bohtey door nahi,
"jadon panchi vekhan nu tarsongay."


pardooshan te Tsunami jahe kayi rakshas tohanu dussangay.
kujh "Karam" jahe odhon kalam nal sadey dil de dukh v dusan gay.
ohdi chita v lakrda wali hai mar k tan devo chud tusi.
main issey dal da panchi san kyon dalon kita vakh tusi.

Kadon tak rukhan nu vadon gay."
"sanu ghuran de vichon kadon gay."
"oh din v bohtey door nahi,
"jadon panchi vekhan nu tarsongay."


very well written....keep up d good work..tfs

Bahut hi changa likhya. Kafi vadi soch da malak hai tu. Rab kare teri soch nu kise di nazar na lage.

very well written 22 g....

again hats off!!!!

i think amrinder ji karam ji ll be one of the next memebers of kosse chanan sath.....

thanx alot

ohdi chita v lakrda wali hai mar k tan devo chud tusi

bahut wadhia

mere raahi tusi janeme ho
mere naal hi tusi marna hai
mere naal hi tusi kehdna hai
mere naal hi tusi hasna hai
meinu aapna sathi rehan deo
meinu evein na tusi vakh karo
mein tuhade lai hi zinda ha
mein tuhade lai hi mar zana